It's really nice!

love these. so sweet! :D
okay, the only thing I found even remotely wrong was in number two on the third line and it isn't even wrong, just sounds kinda off. "how did you have" sounds odd, I recomend something like "why do you have".
Just a thought.
great job!

Alana: GAH so CUTE! ^_^

Leo: Cheesy that's what it is!

I liked all three drabbles, but especially the second one intrigued me - it was simple yet said everything needed...good work!

Good first try. ^-^ I found nothing wrong grammatically, and the drabbles are what they should be (or what I love about drabbles, anyhow): short, sweet and poignant. Leon's a bit too mushy here, but then, I love mush, so that doesn't really demerit my opinion of your writing. Keep it up!

Yours,
A fellow Noypi ("Save the Last Dance for Me" was a dead giveaway. ^o^)

Oh, cute! Very good for your first try. Of course, it could have used more discription, but a lot of people have trouble with that so don't sweat it. Good luck in the future!