Reviews for Kingdom of the Elemental Hearts

Reviews For: Kingdom of the Elemental Hearts - Reviews: Page 1 of 26

Loveless727 2008-07-20 ch 26,	abuseIs Kouichi and Riku going to become a couple? O.O I hope so ...
Syaoran-Lover 2008-07-03 ch 27,	abuseOMG! OMG! OH MY GOD! WOW, this was amazing! ^.^ Lovely chapter and whoa! I'm ALWAYS amazed at your explanations! I find it totally awesome how you can mix theories from different animes and games into one! I was completely awed! Of course, I was especially eager to see "Kouichi" acting Kouichi-ish and just may hope that he really was Kouichi... but then you cut off right where things get so interesting thereafter... ^^' NO! Gimme more! Gimme more! KOUICHI! (LOVED the chapter!) DEFINITELY read ya' next! ^.~ P.S.: Obviously, unless I was using a medium, I'm not dead and yes I'm stull around... though I'm having quite a rough end of term, so I barely had time to read any ffs, including the ones you updated (I think were Balanced and X Evolution). Do plan on reading, I just can't precise when.
JereduLevenin 2008-06-25 ch 15,	abuseJust wanted to point out: Licht Sieger = light WINNER, not light SABER. Yes, the weapon is a light saber, but "licht Sieger" translates to "Light Winner." Light Saber would be Licht Säbel. >_< Other than that, it's GREAT so far~! n_~ Also, Mercurymon's shields are called the "Irony Mirrors." It's "Bo," not "Bow" when referring to a staff. Bo staff. I know it's a little late to be saying this, but if you ever feel the need to go touch up old chapters, be sure to fix that. The only "Bow" weapon is the kind that shoots arrows. :) There are a few other big things, but I can't remember them at the moment. Anywho. Just wanted to set that straight. Grammar, I don't care about. But mistakes like those will confuse the hell out of some readers. Plus, getting the German translations right is important. But seriously, this is an incredible story and I can't wait to see the rest. I know real life is keeping you busy (I have a full time job and classes at the University (UTD), so I can sympathize. I love this fic, and you're doing an awesome job! Keep it up! n_~
Dragon and Sword Master 2008-06-23 ch 27,	abuse...damn and this is what I get for not reading the side story, Reverse Rebirth sighs oh well. It seems as if the end is near, and I can't wait to see how you'll end it. DASM
windstar 2008-06-22 ch 27, anon.	abusefinally an update! And a good one at that! Great job!
The Violent Tomboy 2008-06-22 ch 27,	abuseOoh...Man, what happened to Kouichi...? So the seven hearts of darkness, well, Kohaku was obviously one, but I wonder what the others would be? Sasuke would be the top of my list, but he's already shown up, unless he was taken afterwards...?
Hi Kitsune 2008-06-22 ch 27,	abuseAww, Riku's worried for the twins, and is way over-protective of lil ol Kouichi. How sweet XD Kouichi is one of those Dark Hearts since no one really knows where he is except for Xantha, and most probably Myotismon... Great chappy Gemini-chan! Hi Kit
Light's Blue Blossom 2008-06-21 ch 27, anon.	abuseI kinda got lost with the Cauldron and hearts explanation but I think I got the gist of it. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder who those "boys" are and how everything will turn out. It was a well written chapter to transition the plot! UPDATE SOON!
Raefele 2008-06-21 ch 27,	abuseWow, I really liked this part! At the last chapter I was happy Kouichi was introduced. Does that mean the InsideOutside sisterfic is finished? And the whole Riku and Kouichi thing, is that going to play out here? Well, I can't wait to find out what happens. Please update soon! :D
Quatre Winner 2008-06-21 ch 27,	abuseCuraja's the correct form! Darned handy spell in FFI, that it is! I don't remember if I've reviewed before, but I'll just say taht I'm really enjoying this, you've mixed the various pieces of the differet worlds together quite spectacularly. Pity there isn't any Tamers or Savers here, but since Frontier's my favorite I can't complain, eh? Plus I'm a massive Kingdom Hearts fan, so really, I can't complain about the content. However, and I mean this in quite a nice way, you should get a beta reader, since there are occasional grammatical errors that interrupt the flow of the story. Otherwise, very well done, I'm looking forward to what's coming next!
TenshiGosuperu 2008-06-21 ch 27,	abuseThis chapter was great! Filled with intrigue and mystery and action too. Update as soon as you can.
fice 2008-06-16 ch 5, anon.	abusekage bushin(sp) is the correct name for art of the shadow doppelganger
Light's Blue Blossom 2008-06-11 ch 26, anon.	abuseIf Myotismon is here...does that mean the other DD from season 1/2 will enter the picture? Nothing good ever comes with him. And the Crystal Tokyo part was really good, especially uniting most of the characters! Can't wait to see what happens next! UPDATE SOON!
Twilight Soldier 2008-05-10 ch 24,	abuseWonderful! I love it. There's no Riku/Sora though. Pout. It's a great story though. Update soon please!
chi chan24 2008-04-13 ch 26,	abuseoh please don't take as long to put up the chapter as you took with this one!

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