 Ghostwriter 2009-04-04 . chapter 4Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 wlshygirl79 2009-01-07 . chapter 9OMG...this was so so so good...I loved it...My heart broke for Derrik thought at the end...but wow...really well done! |
 coops-mistress 2008-08-10 . chapter 9This was a really good story, had a great plot and storyline, but it just felt like a cliff-hanger, you know? I was hoping there'd be more...But I loved the story to this, it was very interesting... |
 Mony19 2006-12-31 . chapter 9I am not too sure how I feel about the ending. I am glad everything is alright wit the team but I feel bad for Derek, you could have let him at least have his girlfriend back. He will definately feel awkward about everything for a long time. |
 sbfangal 2006-12-22 . chapter 9 well im most say that its a really great story bommer to read that no bren and shal i really dont like bren emma parings i just cant picture them together
but i do give you credit for the story great ending by the way ! |
 imjuzakyd 2006-12-18 . chapter 9Wow. VoT is finally finished. *cries happily*
I kinda guessed something would be off in the future, because, really, there's no way you can change the past without changing something in the future. I like the twist. Although now I'm curious if Shalimar still remembers him and if she's feigning an innocent look at his reaction, or if she really forgot about everything and is genuinely surprised with his behavior.
I'm so jealous of you! You're not obliged to write anything for this fandom anymore. Gr. I swear, I am just finishing that challenge *points to Emma Anthology* and I am so out of here as well.
^_^ |
 karen147145 2006-12-12 . chapter 8Well dont worry it did lol. I love it
Well i cant wait for the last chapter of this story, And keep with the updating lol. |
 bohemianbabe 2006-12-11 . chapter 8 amazing!
first of all though, you are in trouble for taking so long to update! You rule deary, and i love the stories. god knows i watch the music vids that go with them over and over and over.! Just hurry up and write though!
keep it up
love you
tana |
 Mony19 2006-12-11 . chapter 8Wow I just happened to check and you updated. I loved this update.
I like these feelings Emma keeps getting about Derek but it is understadable that they aren't suppose to know. It's good that Shal figured it out though, but Brennan and Emma are the two who shouldn't figure it out.
Can't wait for more
ud soon |
 karen147145 2006-10-20 . chapter 7Hey i no its kinda been a while for this story to be updated but i really really do love it and would love for it to be updated and i'm guessing a load of other people would as well.
So i hope you update this story as it is extremly good and i would love for there to be a new chapter and for it to be completed. |
 Redhead2 2006-02-27 . chapter 7 Please, please, please, don't leave me hanging here. Update soon. Everyone has to figure it out. Then they'll have memories in 2030, like Adam knowing he'll be a good leader.
This is such a great story. Thank you. |
 Redhead2 2006-02-27 . chapter 6 Ah. I can't believe how well you have me glued to this computer. I really loved the interaction between Derek and Brennan. Shalimar's starting to figure things out, too. I love it. |
 Redhead2 2006-02-27 . chapter 5 I love it. Just what they didn't want to happen. What now?
I only have 7 chapters to read. I hope you're ready with chapter 8 soon. |
 Redhead2 2006-02-27 . chapter 4 Oh...what a twist. I love it. I have so much work to do but I have to keep reading. Bravo. |
 Redhead2 2006-02-27 . chapter 3 So tender. Jesse was always so sensitive. I guess Jenny and Adam are immune. Good job. |