Wow. What the heck happened? Why was he buried? GAR! This totally drew me in. I desperately hope you update this soon!

Dude. Was he buired alive? Well, I'm pretty sure about that one... but why was he? What happened to him? WHY does he have amneisa? Must... know...

Waiting patitently for more,
Kiora

Oh my, I -- wow. That's just all I can say. Your intro is so powerful and luring, I couldn't stop reading it! I hope you update soon! Hm ... what could happen?? Why was he in a box? How'd the newsies find him?? It just brings up so many questions!! Please update!! ;)

~Shakespearean Fool~ ;)

So, what? was he buried alive? I wrote a story like that once. It was for a challenge, and I kind of like it... This is crazy, I hope you update soon so we can figure out what was going on! you have such a way with words, i really enjoyed this!
jacky higgins

You are now my SLA A A A A A A A AVE.

*evil cackle*

I mean, something less disturbing.

This was beautiful.

I think that only you can do amnesia and make it convincing and non-stupid.

My favorite line?

"the strings of agony in his head."

And now...for Horses.

O_O awesome. very interesting. want to see more ^_^

oh no! Poor little Snitchy!

Why do you have so much fun torturing him?!?

... why do I have so much fun reading about you torturing him?!?

love,
Aura

Woah. Woah. Like MAJOR woah. Dark. No pun intended.