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Tani Barton
2008-02-14 . chapter 4
Thank you so much for fulfilling my longing for Ken fic. I loved the way that you wrote him in this, and I really enjoyed the blend of humor and action/adventure. Great job!
NamarieGreenleaf
2006-10-03 . chapter 4
so damn funny! ^^
legal-drug
2005-08-12 . chapter 2
Heh...I couldn't really picture Ken as making a very good chick, but hey I guess he can be a pretty lady after all...I like the fic its good ^_^
rachelAbendstern
2005-06-09 . chapter 4
This was the funniest fic I've read in a while!
Ken's running commentary was absolutely hilarious!
Nice work!
Seph Lorraine
2005-05-28 . chapter 4
Haha! That was hilarious-- as for Ken, I'd be pretty pissed. No forgiveness. I'd be livid. He handled it better-- good thing, I didn't want Youji to die.

Very nice fic, funny premise, well written. Enjoyed it much. :)
Kay
2005-05-24 . chapter 4
*cheers* The end, but such a fantastic one! I got my ounce of danger, my hilarious ranting Ken, Yohji being both annoying and cute, and the destruction of the dress and high heels!

The satisfaction humming in me is like a 50,0 volt fence. Or something.

Poor Ken. Just his luck he'd get an abusive psychotic. But I loved the chase-- very well written and enjoyable with poor Ken tripping all over the place and being shot at, and the ending Yohji/Ken hints making me very happy and glowy. Amusing one-liners. (Especially liked, "Not to be outdone, I take three paces away. The third is because he reeks of stale beer." Very amusing.)

Great ending! I hope you write more comedies like this sometime! ^__^
shikigami-kun
2005-05-24 . chapter 4
LOL, that was a perfect end! Yeah Angst! ^_^ And I'm impressed you managed to keep the humour up for so long. I can only sparsly pop it in since Angst is my one true calling! And I'm glad to know it's yours too. That way I'm not alone and I can almost garauntee that I'll have something good to read whenever you post! Yeah!

Thanks for sharing! ^_^
darkness eternal
2005-05-21 . chapter 4
great story!
Nichts
2005-05-20 . chapter 4
That was a great ending. I was thrilled to see Youji come to Ken's rescue, although I wish he had done it sooner! But then Ken wouldn't have been able to get all banged up and worried, so that wouldn't have been as good.

I was a bit worried despite myself for a few moments there- had the 'oh my god please somebody rescue Ken!' thing going on.

And no, Ken didn't take kindly to the damsel in distress thing at all, did he? I'm glad he got to use that vase to its full potential.

I have to say that I really started cracking up when Ken said 'Um, whoops?' That was just perfect. Thank you.

Well, thank you for writing this! It was well done and a fantastic read. I enjoyed it much.
BarbaraA
2005-05-20 . chapter 4
I really loved this story! My kid was demanding I print it out so she could read it. She'll just have to sit here and read.

You do comedy well. Hope you do some more. Or even drama with some comedic elements. Or should I say snappy lines.

Go you!
Barbara
aimless-37
2005-05-20 . chapter 1
What I found so hilarious is that he actually cross dressed in the anime... stewerdess anyone? (SNORT).

Oh this was a real pleasure to read and just what I needed after a steady diet of Weiss angst lately.

It was humerous to the extreme and Ken's comments had me giggling all the way through. I applaud you for writing Ken fics...there are damn few of them. Plus you write them so well.

Yohji and Ken's kiss then Ken's confusion was delightful. Not even Ken is safe from Kudoh's oh so very talented lips. I sent a link to all my friends and I know they will adore this fic like I did.
Hugs
Amy
Night-Owl123
2005-05-10 . chapter 3
update soon! ^_^
Kay
2005-05-06 . chapter 3
*cheers* OH! Oh oh oh oh! This is the perfect End of Finals present ever! I'm sorry, but I'm a complete fangirl who enjoys crossdressing, pissy Ken. I love how you've balanced him out so well-- it's very well characterized. Many crossdressing stories tend to make the character sound as feminine as they're dressing, but you've kept Ken's personality perfectly intact (in that he's not exactly happy about said crossdressing) and it works out very humorously.

Aw. Yohji kisses. Hahaha. I *adore* Yohji in this.

As usual, loved your writing-- I know you say you don't like first person, but this is fantastic work. And it's very funny, especially with all of the men hitting on poor Kenken. You have a very intelligent, witty sort of sense of humor-- it's not just cheap, stupid stunts-- that you can pull off without much effort at all, seemingly. I love it. Your comedy is as good as your angst. Gods.

... and hey, comedy or not, gotta love the foreboding ending. It made me squeal. Drunk Kenken alone with the flower pots and the crazy, menacing businessman of sorts. LOVE it. I don't mind a bit of trouble at all-- the inner fangirl in me squeals with joy.

As usual, in closing, a great piece of work. Definitely a great way to start the evening. And now I'm off to the rest of your updates! Huzzah!
Ryia Jen Rowen
2005-05-03 . chapter 3
Poor Ken. Everyone keeps hitting on him. I think he would make a really good girl if he were to put his mind to it and try a little. He did cross-dress a few times in the anime...

Youji had better be keeping an eye on poor Ken. Or else our boy is in a lot of trouble, and Youji will be in even more trouble when Ken gets a hold of him after the mission.

I really love your fic and it's going on my favorites list now. I can't wait to see the next part!!
Nichts
2005-04-27 . chapter 3
I admit it- I actually read this chapter when you first posted it, decided to wait until the next morning to review [it was one of those late-night fic reading extravaganzas I'm so fond of] and then completely forgot that I hadn't reviewed. I really thought I had. I'm sorry! On with the review-

Once again, lovely. And once again, I'm actually quite worried about Ken in this situation. The cliffhangers, they're killing me. You do a wonderful job in Ken's point of view and he had me snickering quite a few times.

Ogawa is a lecherous bastard, isn't he? Excellent job with his character as well- I want to smack him in the face for Ken's sake. I certainly hope someone comes to the rescue of Ken's virtue- I'd be just as happy if Ken got to beat the snot out of Ogawa himself. Anyways, can't wait to read the next part!
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