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Babeinthewind
2008-07-24
ch 13,
abuseIt's been a long summer with the kids and I'm throughly enjoying this little side trip with your story. Here's hoping you'll be adding those chapters fast... and soon!
StephaniePm
2008-06-26
ch 13,
abuseI really like this story, any chance of an update?
Howlingatdmoon
2008-06-11
ch 13,
abuseOh, that little devil. She's so much like her father. I love how you have captured the struggle of raising a pre-teen. Are you going to continue this story? Please!? I really enjoyed this story and your writing style.
Vulcan Rider
2008-05-20
ch 13,
abuseExcellent story, as your work always is! I know it's been a long time since an update, but this story is so good and meaty with so much potential for hilarious dialogue that I have it marked for alerts, so please update when you can.

I know you have to write when the muse allows and real life doesn't interfere, but those of us who aren't privy to the inner working of your plotting mind are dying to read the rest. Keep up the fantastic work.
Mag
schaefy
2007-10-31
ch 13,
abuseHey,
I just read through your story after reading anothr one (about steph) and I thought essentially it was good but I suppose my perception of ranger is a bit different. There were some reactions or things he said that didn't quite match with the originals but I attribute that to your own style. Its good, but make sure you put in some positive steps for Ana - being negative about it is not going to develop the story as much. Maybe get her on track and then back to square one or something. But put in something positive. Feel good. You know what I mean! Just out of curiousity, which book did you write this after?
Anyway great work, my sympathies for your friend and I wish you luck with your teenage daughter - My advice is explain your limits to her. But not in a way that scolds her evvery time. Help her develop her own limits.
Good luck and keep writing!
isy
Beth
2007-10-02
ch 13, anon.
abuseI'm reading it and I think it's great. I'm sorry about your friend. I hope you write another chapter when you have time.
coffee2lover
2007-08-23
ch 13,
abuseupdate! cause i love it
Anonymous
2007-08-12
ch 13, anon.
abuseI still read it
mrbubblesandme
2007-08-11
ch 13,
abuseGreat chapter! and i wouldn't worry about not updating, it's still a good story and it's going somewhere. and wow, of all the stories i've read, i haven't imagined you to be able to have a pre-teen daugther! haha Keep it up!
Stephannie1014
2007-08-11
ch 13,
abuseWOW... I hope you continue this... I love it! I have a 6 year old with a teen attitude so I can feel your pain. I can't wait for the next chapter.
lois
2007-08-11
ch 13, anon.
abusenice chapter, babe! Glad to see you finding some time to write. And your Ranger at the end, seems 'almost' domestic. Really lovin' him. LOL Steph really does need Spanish lessons.

Lois :)
HunnyDu2
2007-08-10
ch 13,
abuseThis stoy is great, you have to keep it going :)
bobthedog
2007-08-10
ch 13, anon.
abuseOf course I'm still reading!! I'm thrilled to see a new chapter! THX!
Blackonyx21
2007-08-10
ch 13,
abuseAw come on, do you have to cut it off there? Please update soon!
cricket527
2007-08-10
ch 13,
abuseIt's being read! =)
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