 1phantasmic 2009-07-25 . chapter 13I just read all of your stories on your page. I love your writing. Clear, concise, emotional...lots of goodies! Now, what I want to know is: are you ever going to continue/finish "Ranger's Little Girl'? This story runs the gamut...Ranger's love for Steph, Steph's love for Ranger, Ranger's love and fear of his daughter, and Steph handling the governess job like she had kids of her own. I'd love to see more...Ana growing up and settling down, Steph and Ranger finally getting together; maybe having Marta killed off in Iraq so Ana can stay with her dad (rough, I know, but would be a good twist). Pre-teens are such stinkers (I've raised 2 and lived to tell the story) and there's always something Ana could be getting in trouble over.
Just please consider it. You have me hooked! Thanks, Pam |
 allyn3 2008-09-30 . chapter 13I love this story! I love the interactions between steph and Ana and I really hope that you continue this. I know it's been a while, but I would love to read more. |
 Babeinthewind 2008-07-24 . chapter 13It's been a long summer with the kids and I'm throughly enjoying this little side trip with your story. Here's hoping you'll be adding those chapters fast... and soon! |
 StephaniePm 2008-06-26 . chapter 13I really like this story, any chance of an update? |
 Howlingatdmoon 2008-06-11 . chapter 13Oh, that little devil. She's so much like her father. I love how you have captured the struggle of raising a pre-teen. Are you going to continue this story? Please!? I really enjoyed this story and your writing style. |
 Vulcan Rider 2008-05-20 . chapter 13Excellent story, as your work always is! I know it's been a long time since an update, but this story is so good and meaty with so much potential for hilarious dialogue that I have it marked for alerts, so please update when you can.
I know you have to write when the muse allows and real life doesn't interfere, but those of us who aren't privy to the inner working of your plotting mind are dying to read the rest. Keep up the fantastic work.
Mag |
 schaefy 2007-10-31 . chapter 13Hey,
I just read through your story after reading anothr one (about steph) and I thought essentially it was good but I suppose my perception of ranger is a bit different. There were some reactions or things he said that didn't quite match with the originals but I attribute that to your own style. Its good, but make sure you put in some positive steps for Ana - being negative about it is not going to develop the story as much. Maybe get her on track and then back to square one or something. But put in something positive. Feel good. You know what I mean! Just out of curiousity, which book did you write this after?
Anyway great work, my sympathies for your friend and I wish you luck with your teenage daughter - My advice is explain your limits to her. But not in a way that scolds her evvery time. Help her develop her own limits.
Good luck and keep writing!
isy |
 Beth 2007-10-02 . chapter 13 I'm reading it and I think it's great. I'm sorry about your friend. I hope you write another chapter when you have time. |
 coffee2lover 2007-08-23 . chapter 13update! cause i love it |
 Anonymous 2007-08-12 . chapter 13 I still read it |
 mrbubblesandme 2007-08-11 . chapter 13Great chapter! and i wouldn't worry about not updating, it's still a good story and it's going somewhere. and wow, of all the stories i've read, i haven't imagined you to be able to have a pre-teen daugther! haha Keep it up! |
 Stephannie1014 2007-08-11 . chapter 13WOW... I hope you continue this... I love it! I have a 6 year old with a teen attitude so I can feel your pain. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 lois 2007-08-11 . chapter 13 nice chapter, babe! Glad to see you finding some time to write. And your Ranger at the end, seems 'almost' domestic. Really lovin' him. LOL Steph really does need Spanish lessons.
Lois :) |
 HunnyDu2 2007-08-10 . chapter 13This stoy is great, you have to keep it going :) |
 bobthedog 2007-08-10 . chapter 13 Of course I'm still reading!! I'm thrilled to see a new chapter! THX! |