I think you captured Roy Mustang's feeling perfectly in this fic. I can imagine him thinking all that in his mind. Not too cheesy and just enough emotion to make the readers feel for him. Great job.

Oh my gosh, I have GOT to quit reading these things. I was just thinking about how Roy's last conversation had gone with Maes, and how wrong and terrible it had been that Roy had been robbed of a goodbye. I was tearing up at this! Wonderful, wonderful fic. I loved it!

Avalon

Amazing. Simply amazing. I think I'll go blow my nose now. That was so sad! I'm seriously on the verge of tears! Kudos again!

Lovely, it makes me sad, very well written!

That was really sad and well written. But I missed episode 25, and I read this to sorta fill me in. i 'm gonna cry now. T.T

Very insightful look at their relationship. Keep writing!