You wrote this really well, capturing a remarkable kid who is too advanced for the world. Real well done. And I love Grant! Xx

Great story

Again, read this story before, still love it, and enjoyed reading it again.

don't ask me why, but I love this cold version of John. seems to suit him.

keep up the good work, i really like you're stuff

I've been so remiss with my reviewing! :o I love this story, though. You've really taken us back to the boys when they were younger, and your portrayal of John is wonderful. It really echoes Scott's comments in 'Date' when he says that John used to be a bit like Gordon, but isn't anymore. That's already visible here. :)

Can't wait to re-read the rest. Carry on!

Hey, this is surely interesting! I always thought of John as the perfect student, just like Scott. Maybe John has to work a bit harder, cuz I thought Scott more talented, but always saw John as a hard worker and A-student as well! So this is really an interesting point of view! I wonder why he's hiding so much and why he behaves this way...he almost seems depressed! I can't wait to find out more about his feelings and I hope he's not *too* sad...and what does Jeff think of all this? Update soon! :)