"Rory smiled to herself, tucking a cardigan under her chin so she could fold in the sleeves. “I’m afraid I’m just not missing Joss Whedon enough to sit through Alien IV again.”

“I am,” Marty groaned, put out by the lack of Joss Whedon fare on television. “But why do you have to go?”" Made my night!

Whoa. What a story. You are certainly a superb writer, and you manage to create whole worlds in your stories--they could put a picture to shame. This is a crazy story--I like the way the bits and pieces are shown from each side, and we learn Rory's view and then Jess's view, and the whole thing is never quite complete. I like the story of the Carvers--the ghost aspect adds something. Is it real? Is it not? Is it just a trick? If the ghost is real, does she really want Jess and Rory together? This story is a full story, though the ending is abrupt and not a real ending, somehow it all works. The entire universe of this story is just wonderfully presented--it all makes sense. Basically, I really liked this story--I love all your stories. You're an amazing writer. I have a feeling you've abandoned the fandom, but I hope you continue writing in real life, because it would be a shame to deprive the world of your descriptive talents.

woah! that is original. i've never read anything quite like it. it was great! though a bit confusing... keep writing, keep kicking ass!
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Well, I definitely liked it. I loved the idea of the ghost and its background. Once again, you've written another clever and original story! (Now if you'd just update Shivery...)

Well done.

so mr. carver haunts rory and mrs. carver haunts jess? is mrs. carver trying to help rory and jess or is it that she likes jess only. or is it that mr. carver wanted to see rory naked? i'm confused!

holy crap!! this is really good! like super good! update!! SOON!!

Excellent work, the quality is outstanding (even more so compared to all other fanfictions). I would have liked to provide you with constructive criticism, but I had trouble finding anything to point if I did I'd be splitting hairs to do so, and came to the conclusion a person of my writing caliber simply could not. Also the reference to Quassy Park brought back so many memories, so thank you for that.

OMG!! This is a great story! I love the situations that you put both Rory and Jess in, and all of their almost-encounters. Eww..the Doty guy, nasty. lol, Update soon!

can you just stop being so good for like two seconds?! I can't say anything bad about anything you've written. Although, I am dying for more on Shivery. That is, by far, the best fanfiction I have ever read. I look forward to more of your work in the future!

*gee dee*

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. I love the way you describe Rory in Jess mind and his emotions. Great job!!

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crazy, crazy and fascinating, completely off kilter and awesome in every sense of the word.

Excellent stuff...I love the detail you put into your writing. What's happening with Shivery, by the way?

Sorry I didn't review before. Real life got in the way, and while I definitely read this the minute I got a Green Eve author alert, I wanted to give it proper attention again.
I know part of the reason you write fanfic is to improve upon your writing skills, but as a reader, I must thank you. Few, if anyone, takes the time anymore to develop fanfic (anymore). As a reader, thank you for putting in the effort. It shows. And it makes it great fun to read.
I hope real world hasn't swallowed you up as well. It seems there are many new faces in the GG fandom (which makes me happy), but they are overbearing on the few originals that are left.
Thanks, for nostalgia's sake.

i intended to review but i'm speachless... i think i'll come back later...