 vampiredog 2008-05-20 . chapter 3 hay lance u should realy add more chapters here is my idea.
"come on inuyasha we have to go" shippo commanded
"i dun want ta" inuyasha complain
"inuyasha dont comlapain"
"but...but...but" inuyasha stammerd
"no buts inuyasha or you'll get a spanking" warned shippo
"kay i'll be good" said inuyasha
"good lets go" said sihppo
"kay" mummbeld inuyasha
"good" said shippo
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a few hours later the kitsune-gumi was walking to a town when shippo stopped and inuyasha started wiggleing out of kagomes grasp.
"hm whats wrong shippo-san" inquierd kagome.
"just hold inuyasha and dont let him go got it" commanded shippo
"kay" the rest of the kitsune-gumi replied.
shippo then left depper in the woods and found sesshomaru standing there.
"sesshomaru leave and dont bother usand no pain will come" said shippo.
"hm you are no one to commond me, the lord of the western lands kitsune, i can go any where in my lands, and i have the right to visit my younger brother,do not try to stop me or i'll be leaving wih your group and you'll be in the ground" sesshomaru barked. "hm, i'll let you go only to see inuyasha" "agh, you dont tell me to do" thats when inuyasha ran in front of shippo and jumped on sesshomaru.
thats all i have thanks for it thanks four reading |
 luke 2008-05-19 . chapter 2 this is very funny. i think u should add more chapters. i have an idea if u want to hear it send ur answer to |
 inuyasha57 2006-06-07 . chapter 3I'm so happy that you updated. great chapter especially the part about his foot shaking when his ears are rubbed. plz update soon I just cant wait for it. |
 Pure Shikon 2006-06-06 . chapter 3HAHAHAHAHA! I loved it and do please continue! |
 Lucillia 2006-05-15 . chapter 2I like this story alot, I would like to see more. I also have an idea, how about having the group run into Sesshomaru? That would be interesting, especially if Sesshomaru remembers the group as they were before the change and is wondering what the hell happened. |
 inuyasha57 2006-04-17 . chapter 2Would make longer reveiw but hard to type laghfing to hard. Great story. |
 AlexR 2006-03-19 . chapter 2 Great story, i really hope you continue to update it, keep up the good work :D |
 Dante Taisho 2006-03-06 . chapter 1You should have one of them remember the try to get the rest back to normal... eventually. I'm thinking Miroku for the part! |
 inuyasha57 2006-03-02 . chapter 1funey plz update plz |
 ProfessM 2006-02-27 . chapter 1This is a good story made me laugh a few times but is there any reason why Shippou world? Well anyway keep up the good work. |
 puppylove18 2006-02-18 . chapter 2Sorry I don't have any ideas...but I thought I could encourage you...it's a really cute chapter...'kind of confusing'...but cute! |
 puppylove18 2006-02-18 . chapter 1That's cute...'hehe'...can't wait to hear youre next chapter...bye! |
 Endevorer 2006-01-08 . chapter 2this is funny
next thing you know they wil find Sesshomaru and Rin (where sess is a kid and rin is an adult) |
 LeThanial 2006-01-06 . chapter 2i have to say.
this is the first and WEIRDEST shippou fic i have ever read. it's funny! make more chapters soon please! ^^ |
 LordBudFerg 2005-12-18 . chapter 1For all of you wanting a new chapter to this, I've got good news. I was recently approached about taking over this story, and I'm going to do just that. Expect to see more of this sometime in the last week of this year over at DA. |