 alphalover 6/27/11 . chapter 1 great story here... wish the muse would awaken for it! |
 Garnet Sky 3/2/11 . chapter 21I wish there were more stories like this. |
 ladynarutochan 12/29/06 . chapter 21Hello !
I really like your story The queen past is really interessant and Adam/Teela/Aryanna relationship is good;
I wanted to know why didn't you update it ? will you update it one day ? or have you update it on an other website ? |
 Teri 12/25/06 . chapter 20Just rereading an old favorite and wanted to make sure you had a review in 2006. |
 Teri 5/19/05 . chapter 21 Just wanted to make sure you had a review in 2005. I was just checking into see if perhaps there had been an update. I'm still hoping. :) Take Care, Teri |
 Teri 4/6/04 . chapter 21I see by your profile that you are still an active writer. Is there any chance that you intend to finish this story? I have read it many times and always enjoy it it. Nice work! |
 Ms Hobgoblin 2/4/04 . chapter 21Good fic.
Intersting plot, I enjoyed reading it, and found that I could relate to it.
I hope you update it soon.
Hob x |
 Star Mage1 8/13/03 . chapter 21Are you going to continue this story? |
 Chase M. Dakota 2/23/03 . chapter 21this is a great chapter and a great story all around. i would love for you to finish this. does adam tell his father who he really is? |
 phil 1/13/03 . chapter 21 YOu planning on finishing this or not? |
 SlyGriff 1/9/03 . chapter 21I love it! I can't wait till it's finished. I hope you keep up the great work! |
 anon 11/24/02 . chapter 21 this is one of the best fics i have ever read |
 Emmett Thompson 9/9/02 . chapter 21 Hey preety good. Ive been a fan of the MOU since I could remeber and youve capuered it perfectly. Please keep up the good work! |
 Draggon Wolv 4/13/02 . chapter 21Whyed you stop there? You should keep going! And yes...i remember when He-man was on television. I'm getting old I think. |
 Sarah D 3/1/02 . chapter 1 Please, please update this soon! This story is incredible and so well written. It's a story the show should have done. (Actually, as much as I love the show, this is better than any ep they ever wrote!) Please, please update soon. |