This is a great story, I hope you can update it soon. My favorite part was when J’onn entered his mind. The details in that part were excellent. Your style of writing is great, because it really has all the details, and it has so much depth.

I hope you can update soon. Or is "Fade Away" the sequel? Anyway, good luck updating. Keep up the great writing style! -Sapphire

Oh, yeah! This story is AWESOME! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I know! I'm smarter than most people. Very funny joke, actually. I cracked up when Virgil said he'd try not to take that personally. This story rocks!

*snickers* I LOVED this line: “It makes things un-magnet-y.” Brilliant! ^^ Anyways, great first chapter!

Konnichiwa!
Okay, let me start off by saying that I love this story! Its sugoi! Richie no kawaii!! I love how everyone is portrayed in this, especially Richie-kun. He's being angsted, which is always fun to read. The more you love a character, the more you enjoy seeing them in pain. At least, I enjoy tormenting my fav. characters.^_^ The whole blackmail video with Batman was hilarious. Superman has some explaining to do. Well, Batman is a good singer so its understandable that he would enjoy listening to it. But how did Flash manage to record the footage? Was he in the bathroom with Bruce? However he did it, it raises questions that probably shouldn't be answered.

Virgil is so fun here. He keeps teasing Richie-kun and getting a rise out of him. And the innuendo is just so great! I really wish I could write as well as you do. And to veer totally off topic, I just started reading into the Static Shock fandom. And already I've been corrupted by Virgil/Richie slash. TA well, the two of them just work so well together. And enough of my ranting. Gomen if I bored you. The whole plot with Richie-kun developing stong telepathic and telekinetic abilities really appeals to me. Those are my favorite types of psychic abilites and I personally think telekinesis and pyrokinesis are the most dangerous psychic powers in existence. They both affect all things, not just certain elements or materials. That is what makes them so destructive. And if you haven't guessed, I've read the novel Firestarter more than once. I can't wait to see how everyone, criminals and other heroes, deal with Richie-kun's developing powers. He obsviously poses a great threat. So I can't wait until you update. do so soon, Onegai! Since I like this fic so much, you get a cookie!(~hands over cookie~) Enjoy it! Love ya!oh, and I added the story to my fav.list.
Ja Ne

PLEASE continue this soon! This is the fourth slashy static story I've read today that's been left unfinished for months, and it's driving me mad.

I see this could have quite an angsty turn, maybe we'll get to see it. I look forward to wherever this is going.

This story is fantastic, Richie is one of my favourite characters. You have him in character. I'm just itching for you to post again. But that can wait, beacuse it's your opinion as the writer that matters. But I give you personally eleven out of ten stars.

dude, update update update! PLEAASE PLEASE! I wanna know what happen next. And soon. It's been several months since you've updated.

Dude update soon, I wanna know what happens next. And how is this RV if nothings really happening between them than what always was.

::Big pout:: Not fair.

You MUST finish this story! Posting a story is like making a promise to the readers. If you don't think you can finish this story, please try to adopt it out to someone you trust to finish it. It's really good.

On a lighter note, I concur. The more you love a character, the angstier s/he will be, and the more problems s/he will have. It's pure love ;)

update plaese

:3 I would love it if you would finish this! It is a lovely fic.

wow great story

mrp! huzzah! I get the ultimate internet XD I like this story alot and... I know that I only asked for one more chapter but... it'd be really really cool of you to write another one! eh? well if not then I can go and read some of your other stories. again. it's a win win situation!