So what happens next?

make...a...new...chapter...NOW! BEFORE I FUCKIN EAT YOU!

Well now, it would seem that I've stumbled across a rather good story. There's a lot I like about it, so I'll start with the basics.

Your grammer and spelling are very good. They allow the fic to continue moving swiftly and smoothly, and all in all, make it pleasent to read.

The storyline is good, and the characters are believable.

So, all in all, this is really a wonderful fic, and I greatly anticipate your next update.

Update it's really really good, besides KohakuxKanna is my favorite ship, and there aren't that many fics. So plz update.

this is pretty cool. update

The story was written really well, but you haven't written much about Kanna. Bu I can see why. You can't reveal the plot in the first couple chapters. By the way, could you make them longer, the chapters, I mean? The transitions could use a little work. The end of the chapter should be the height of the suspense. The last sentence should foreshadow what is going to happen in the next chapter, but without giving away too much, which is hard, I'll admit. But, in the end it pays off, but is nothing without a well written story. It's amazing by the way. This is only meant to be constructive critisism, but if you're offended, I apologize. Update soon, because I'm really interested in the story, Kohaku/Kanna is a coupling that you don't see often.

Great story, I'll definitely linger to see how this all will turn out, hope you update soon.

o I love the story! update as soon as you can!! i need to read more...it is just so...well written and really good! please update soon!

hey i love this story and cant wait to read more please oh please dont make this a kag inu fic there are way too many already and she is so whinny in the show and manga good luck on the next chapter hope its longer dont worry a boring chapter or two is ok since you have to get to know the characters before getting to the major plot for instance the lord of the rings book sometime makes you want to fall asleep while at other times you wont want to put it down thats the way most good stories start so im betting this shall be an awsome fic ill review next chapter too good luck Ja Ne ^.~

I love your story! So please I beg of you! Update!

Sorry for the short review but I have a softball game. But I'm going to read your other stories.

hello okay heres a tip when ever you use the word click for a soor sound use ;to conjion the sentence after it like this. click;inuyasha gave a finnal dug.

Hey, like you said- this is getting better! However, it was so incredibly short! Please keep writing. ^^

Interesting! I do hope you continue with this story. It seems like it has a lot of potential.

Cool! Inuyasha Kohaku interaction! I just realized now how rare that is...Cool!

heh. That's all.

Can't wait to see where you'll go with this story.

Cheers.

I didn't think you would continue this one. Now that you've introduced Inuyasha - ramen junkie hung over his ex-girlfriend - the story looks like it might closely follow the Inuyasha plotline.
Sounds like Miroku is more of a Catholic priest as opposed to a Buddhist monk. I’d be suspicious about the ‘medicine’ he’s got handy.