Ok you had i good story in mind obviously it got lost along the way. Try not to let other people influence your characters. They are yours in the story its your story. If people don't like that they are ooc then tell them to read the actual books instead of fan fiction. The ending was corny but it made sense. For future reference don't give up so easily on your storys. It seemed that there was very little effort in this and though you may have grown bored with it or discouraged at the amount of readers, you are still writing a story and you should have made every effort into making it good. It will make you a better author go the long run. If you didn't like it you should not have posted it. When you tell the readers you don't like it and put none of your heart into it, it discourages people from reading it. Good luck in the future.

Wow. That was one of the strangest, OOC-ness, awesomest DracoxHermione stories I have ever read. Maybe the characters were OOC, but that is what made it "special" and funny like heck.
Half of the time, I was on the ground laughing at some parts and at others, I rolled my eyes at the cliche-ness of it all.

Nonetheless, this was fantastic and incredibly funny. I am going to remember this for a loongg time...
Great job, and nothing to say except that you should write more stories like this.
So long,
-chiachia105-

That was SUCH a great ending! I hate it when stories don't end like that. It just doesn't fell good unless they end up together.

Anyway, you may never get to read this as it's been done a really long time,but I really have to thank you for:

Letting the story consume your time and stress you... So that your usual readers can appreciate it, as well as those who just "bump into the story", like me. Thanks!

Ahahah! That was a really funny review!

And it was a GUH-REAT Chapter. Really.

AWW! They kissed!

Anyway,great plot. Draco isn't much of a bad boy here, but it suits him anyways. Love it!

hahaha
cute =D
i liked it =D

wow! I LOVED IT!! it was so awesome!! into my favs it goes..

THIS WAS SO CUTE!

I loved the PMSing Mione!!

-Luna

Wow. Nice ending. I liked it. Good job.

... not much else to say ...

oh, that was so funny. i especially liked the drunk part. that was the best.

well, that was a very funny chapter. oh, and as for the previous chapter, i loved it too. my fave part so far though is when john says 'i think she got laid'. that was so funny.

read the 1st 2 chapters...i thought they were great!...oh sure, so hermione got drunk(big deal, its ur story!!, u could make her a serial killer if u wanted, not that u wud), and the kiss was really early(but wern't we all waiting 4 dat nyway??!!, who cares!)but till now its bin awesome...hope da rest of it is 2...

i'm SOO sorry that i didnt review in any of the other chapters.

but i read the whole thing in one sitting , and it was soo good i couldnt stop and make a review.

i just wanted to let you know that this it the most AWESOME fic i've ever read!

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE!

AWW!! Sweet ending!! I hate it when a story is cliche, but ends can be cliche. Sometimes. But yours wasn't!! It was sweet!! Cool!! Haha, glad Hermoine decided not to kill him... Hiihii, okay, mostly I hate H/D fics, but I think Hermione was a little bit OOC, which was good, really, so I liked this one. To be honest, it's the only H/D fic I ever read... Well, I'm gone, my little sister and niece are yelling...babies... Hiihii, okay, bye!!

OOHH!! I'm devastated!! I'm heartbroken!! ALL BECAUSE OF YOU!! *crying* Yeah, I'm shocked. BLAISE WAS MEAN TO DRACY!! I LOVE BLAISE AND DRACO!! I'm sad because Blaise was mean, and sad because it was to Draco. Who will I love now?? I know: I pretend I never read that. Yeah, that will help me get over it. Yeah. And, I thought this chap would be finishing, but it was kinda cliffy again. Only good, I'm going to read next chap!! Byebye