Hey, I really liked the story. I was woundering if you spoke much Gaelic? I was just woundering becuase i speak Gaelic and it would be reallycool to know someone else that does. Again, loved the sorry.
Aerin

This was interesting. I love the moment you added in for them. The transition into the second part was a little awkward, but overal I enjoyed this.

KrisEleven~

That was really nice. Very well written, great moment between Aly and Alanna.

That phrase really describes Alanna! I do really like it, even though I'm much more into funny fluff than crying and hurt/comfort.

Great! Love it! Keep writing!

i can understand how she hates joren
i do too
but that guote?
i dont know
it just rings true
i dont know how to expalin it
but i can tell its the truth, and will always be
its really strange.

but that story is good
but the thing i ill remember is the quote,
i just will,
no idea WHY obviously,
but i do.
good work

I enjoy, I enjoy, I ENJOY!

It was sweet

It was really good and sad.

This is so good, but so sad! It was bittersweet.

I really liked that!! Sorry it took so long for me to review, life's been so hectic! Wow, what else is there to say besides amazing!?!

I like it and I am learning new words. In a way I do and dn not like Joren myself for the good and bad reasons in the story.

OMG! TORI, I FLIPPING LOVED IT! PURE AWESOMENESS! I have a story dedicated to me!! yay!! I feel so special! AND DON'T CALL ME POOKIE, FATTY LUMPKIN! For some reason this wasn't on my author alerts. Not cool, peoples. Now I know what story you were talking about. it's not my b-day present? Oh, that's because i saw u writing this on the way to Disneyland, huh? I should've known. I'll talk to u later! ~Kaitlin, NOT Pookie

short and sweet! kinda emotional, which was nice!

Definitely sweet! Loved it! ;D

~LK1512~