Cute.

So cute and fluffy. ^^'

I liked how they went on their list of how many ways to deny the fact. Very funny.

Interesting piece. Nice, very fitting.

Beautiful

Got a little confused with the part with Ed and the high velocity throw pillow... Although I don't see that Ed would freak out _that_ much about the possibility of being related to Roy...

Mostly easy to follow the narrative - and I am a strong supporter of Roy and Ed having a brotherly relationship, or father-son-ish relationship. That's just how it strikes me, so I did appreciate this one.

I also, however, think that Riza plays either an older sister or motherly role to Ed and Al, and I think it would be interesting for you to write one about that.

Great characterization of them, I loved the story. They *do* have a lot in common.

I absolutely loved the little one-word-per-turn exchange between the two on how stupid the idea of blood-relation was. That made my day. Keep it up!

Ah so cute! I love story's with brotherly love!

wonderful! i'm more in favor of brotherly love between roy and ed than them being lovers, and it's so hard finding good fics like that. and this, was an excellent fic. kudos!

yay, that was cute. good writing. ^^V

I can't believe it took me this long to review...so sorry. This was a great story. You did a great job painting the relationship between Roy and Ed. They totally hate eachother's guts one moment and the next they're sticking up for eachother. Good references to Riza in Ed and Roy's little discussion. Their whole talk was very...sweet..if you can use that word to discuss a brotherly conversation. Nice characterizations too. IF those hadn't been well done, the whole story would have fallen appart. I loved it, keep up the good work.

W0ot. I lurve Ed and Roy. They're effing awesome! *floats to cloud nine* And I like the way you changed from Roy's POV to Ed's and then back to Roy again. If written in any other style, I think it would have been rather annoying to me...But anyways! Keep up the good work!

Aw, so cute. *goes off to read other fic mentioned*

I really liked this story, the first one that I've ever read/seen like this one. Keep up the good work.

although not much was said between the two, I felt that a lot was said between the two. keep up the good work, dark