Was totally rockin'!

I was like so bored surfin' n i came across ur story. I play SO3 n Albel Nox rox! lol.

So funny n clever! I had to hold back my laughter (I'm in summer study.) But if i were at home, my neighbors woulda called to see if I had lost it.

OMG, Plz plz keep putting stuff up! Ur a FF expert!

I love it!! XDD I would print it out for my friend but the stupid printer at the school isn't working!! DDX I can't wait to read more of your work =3

That was hilarious XD

This was so funny! I always wondered how Albel would react if he knew the kind of things that were being written/drawn about him on the Internet (provided he could grasp the concept of a world wide web- which is probably galaxy wide in the Star Ocean universe). Okay, well, I can kind of guess.

Albel does seem a bit OOC in this story...I expected his reaction to be a little more violent, even considering that he is with Fayt (in a friendship sense), and his speech seems too casual for the times that he lives in (Elicoor Two being the equivalent of medievil earth) but I'm just being picky. It's a habit, I'm afraid. Okay, so he did like the idea of killing and blood and thats more like the Albel we know and love.

The friendship angle is nice in this, considering that you could have turned this into a yaoi fest, with Fayt and Albel demonstrating what they learned from the net. That would probably be a typical offering from an author, but I'm glad that you didn't.

*adds to favorites*

Hahahahaha xD Great story!

=Moshi Moshi Mai

omg this story was so funny! especially that one part where albel vomits cause of that picture. i couldnt stop laughing after that! lol normally i would have thought this kind of plot would be a bit weird but you diffinetely changed my opinion! i think you should write another one like this! it was good and well written. keep up the good work!

howdy! This fic was REALLY funny! I don't usally laugh aloud when I'm reading fics but I did when reading this one! Keep up the good work ^.^

LOL! That was great! You're stories are so great!! I just can't seem to get enough of them!!

Teehe! I lurve it! Quite funny! I love the line, "Can you really bend that way?" OMG I DIED! Great work!

HAHAHA! That almost made me pee my pants (note to self: don't read with a full bladder). I think you are a great author, this is the second peice of yours that i have read and both of them made me laugh quiet a bit. Keep it up =^-^=

Lol. Cute fic. =P

XD XD XD You said that this was an overused storyline, but I've actually never read something like this before... actually, I've never read anything like this before! And I found it totally hilarious... I was laughing out loud (which is very rare, let me tell you). So thank you for the good time! I really enjoyed this. But as for spelling errors, the end of the second paragraph says "passed" where it should say "past" (since you asked for grammatical fixage). I thought the thing with "slash" was funny. XD It'd be so weird to find stuff like that about yourself online!

This made me giggle a lot (especially the end), and it takes a lot for a fanfic to make me do that ^_^

Awesome job! You should continue this, it's hilarious!

VERY Creative idea,I LOVE this fic!I've always wondered what they'd think of all the stuff on and fanart sites...XD,Please continue,I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Heehee! This is really funny :) I see that Fayt and Albel have never looked at Fanfics before LOL This is a great story. Hope to read more of your stuff soon :)