I LOVE THIS STORY! My friend recommended it to me and I'm glad i got to read it! It's amazing. I love the story and plan to read it all the way! ^0^

Amazing story you deserve more reviews than you get!

Ok here is a list of the good and bad things about your story so far


The fights are immpressive and captivating-good
Sora is Very Very OOC when talking about the seven lords he seems to not only sound more intiligent than he was orignally made not saying thats bad just takes away the orignal sora he also dint care that some of the lords could drown entire villages and reguarded them as

"Doesnt seem to strong"

Or "Is he the weakest of the seven"-bad

Sora can't use the keyblade that seems to destroy the eccence of what kingdom hearts was i hope you allow him to use it later if not you have made a big mistake my friend-bad

This is a overall good crossover with a nice Dynasty warriors-dragonballz-kingdom hearts cross i must say you use the characters well-good


I like the storyline of this so far the concept seems good enough and its long with sequals-good

Over all i would say you have a good story despite some problems i will now continue reading

this story is great!lol keep writing

I just started reading this after I found your pictures on DeviantArt and am officially hooked, I can't wait to start the next chap!!

Great Story!!

Kool

I saw your deviantart and had to read the story that went with the pictures. Can't wait to get to some of those scenes.

great story! I got to say I'm impress!

Exellent! You are a very, very talented writer! Your description is so in depth and you know how to keep it interesting. I'll definately keep reading!

Heh, I'm so far behind...I started reading this fic over at fanart, but for some reason decided to check if you had an account on here. Kinda find it easier to read stories on this site...not sure why lol. I really enjoyed the first chapter of this. You describe everything so well, and your characterisation is perfect. The way you've portrayed the friendship bond between Sora and Riku is nice too. Well, I'm off to continue reading...this fic has me hooked!!

~Midnight Chaos~ ^-^

PS If you allow anonymous people to review, you might get more reviews...but it's up to you ok. Some anonymous reviews can come in handy.

I'm only on the first chapter and I already love this story! Not many people write solid Riku and Sora teaming up fics and I'm relly glad to find one! I know not many ppl have reviewed this story, but please don't let that stop you from writing! I really like your style and I've found that most KH fans just look for romance or yaoi, and are in general very immature... so down be down if THEY don't like your story.

I'm going to read the next chappie now! Keep writing (looking forward to reading your 600 0 word conclusion!)

Alright, I've already noted a couple problems with this story. First off, your characters talk way too much about things when they should try to keep them simple. Secondly, not all your readers will know what a Super Saiyan is, so you should go with a description first and then have him tell them what he had become. A good story, yes, but...Never mind.

~Deaths pet fox

Whow, DBZ Xover? Cool! I love this!

0.0 Oh... my... gosh... THIS STORY IS COOL!!