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Reviews for: Three Broken Hearts
Lavode
2005-03-20 . chapter 1
I'm not sure how it fits into canon, but all that emotion... a moving story. And Brad's reaction fits in with the way he was acting in the latest issue, so I take back what I said about it.
More Minor Stuff:

"Mrs. Silver arrived minuets ago" -- more 18th-century dances.

"'Oh it’ll only take a second, Silver.' The other tall man enthused." -- You might want to make the first period there a comma, and the T in "the" shouldn't be capitalised. This is true of several parts of the fic.

Any chance of a sequel/another chapter?
purplemonky
2005-03-18 . chapter 1
wow. just poignant and delicious and good. really very well written. I truly hope you write some more.
It almost feels as if it were really canon. The good canon.
Wanderlustlover
2005-03-16 . chapter 1
This was so amazingly good.
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