 starfireoftameran 2009-09-03 . chapter 10 hi tht was a nice story an'all
but they say i love you alot dont ya think? |
 Sarah Zitter 2008-09-22 . chapter 10 I love this story can you do a sequel please. I would love to know when starfire and robin go out on there first date. Plus can they become older as will so that robin can become night wing and starfire can just be starfire.Plus can starfire move in with robin it is just an idea that is all really. You don't have to do it if you don't want to. Please e-mail me back at sarah.
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Sarah Zitter |
 anna 2008-07-01 . chapter 10 This was a realy good story.
thank you |
 fionagurls1301 2008-05-17 . chapter 10i lov this story!! |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 10hm... kind of a disapointing ending. but a nice plot and all. hope you can make a sequal... like... uh... slade's revenge plot? lol..
best wishes
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 9aw... little fluffy. but not to much, just cute. now,... the finalie coming up... darn... wish there was more!
best wishes
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 8two more chapter?!!? darn, this story was getting interesting too.
best wishes
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 7ooh... go away slade *pouts* you evil! another facinating chapter. slade might as well be a dictator. go take over the world if your going to brainwash someone. or howabout robin AND starfire?
hm...
best wishes ^.^
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 6poor beast boy *sighs* when a titan goes agaisnt the team he always seems to lose his hair. (masks) lol.
save her robin! save her! ^.^
best wishes ^.^
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 5why did she take the 'r' logo? interesting. another good chapter. and longer compared to your other chapters.
best wishes
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 4ooh... cliffy. ahm... not to be rude, but starfire has abundant strength. 10 times stronger than any human. so i don't think calculations are correct if just a simple rope is holding her back. but oh well. you know what i figured out? she can fly at the speed of light. i always assumed that but geeze! what happened to being able to fly faster than kid flash? after all, he can ALMOST fly at the speed of light. she's probably as fast as superman. but i guess she needs a lot of happy pills to fly that fast. since the emotion 'joy' is used to make her fly.
best wishes
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 3no offense or anything, but i think the chapters should be a little bit longer and not all that rushed. more detail too. but all in all, it has a good plot behind it. and you spelled 'do not' wrong.
facinating that starfire confessed. kind of surprising actually. but good for her. and robin better tell her he loves her or else *hides dagger behind back* *sweat drop* uh... hehe. keep it up!
best wishes
-sam |
 dolphinluver21 2006-08-21 . chapter 2the first chapter was a little short, but apologie accepted. it was just a prolouge after all. another thing though, these first chapters should have some kind of catch to them. So that readers will get hooked into the story. but don't worry, i think it's wonderful for a first time story.
best wishes
-sam |
 bluewatergirl! 2006-08-21 . chapter 6 no u sado |
 allicaora1468 2006-08-17 . chapter 6 YOU HAVE ALOT OF WORDS THAT ARE PUT TOGETHER
THAT ARE SAPOST TO BE SPACED, OTHEWAYS *GREAT* STORY! |