For once, it's a very, very good thing that my cheeks are naturally very, very red. I made the mistake of reading the NC-17 version on my laptop in the company of others.

The line about how fortunate Griss felt to not have last his hearing... Man, oh man. It made my eyes water, it was so perfect.

IGC t DM

*looks at the writer with an adoring look* wow, I like it, and it had better not be the end! *shakes a fist at the writer. PLEASE update, I love it,and it had better continue.

Yeah, more drunk Grissom stories...come on, he has to loosen up sometime.

more, more, more!

Hell no you are not goignt to end it htere this is getting WAY NO INTRESTING. Wow love the way Gil just asked about her cloths ja ja defently part of my drinkl would have come out of my nose . Ja jaj a hope to see more very soon. Please don't leave it there.

you should definately continue with the story!

O, a mellow Griss. I like this one.

Can you send me the addy for GeekFiction please?

Thank you.

Kit.

great chapter!

This is great ! love it.. More more more!

no, not the end ! Sure want to know what happens next ! Update soon please !

this better not be the end! i got to know who's place they ended up at!

love to know the url for geekfiction.Tarrabeena@

high i think your stories are great and i dont have the addy for geekfiction

Ooh, Les...

Hot, hot, hot! I liked it muchas bunches. Can't wait to read the smutty version!

Chocolate, alcohol, flirting... i think i need a cold shower. you've made what for all intents and purposes is a public conversation feel incredibly intimate and sexy. Phew! More please (and I'll take a chocolate martini too, if you're offering...) :-)