Oh my gods!... I found this soooo funny! every time i read something funny i just have to say it aloud, and i said most of this aloud! I thought that having Remus on a chocolate high was a really good idea, and i thought it was really funny when Molly attacked Snape, throttling him, and Sirius and Remus just looked on and ate porridge! Hysterical!
Thanks for the highlight of my day!
Lils

I'm sorry. This was shit. In a real duel, Snape would completely fuck Sirius up.

I was going to start off by saying, oh please, "The tension was so thick you could cut it with a knife", you could find someting so much better-but then I finished the paragraph and realized you did that on purpose. So that's a good point-you weren't serious about the cliche.

I like Remus situated in Switzerland.

Snape's ebony wand. Everyone gives him ebony. Why not chestnut or cherry, for Pete's sake?

"Fred raised an eyebrow. “Did he just say ‘Scary Greasy Git’ Snape?”" Had to laugh there.

“You mean Lupin’s a druggie? That’s wicked awesome!”

*snort* I'll bet at least one of the Marauders was in the 70s and 80s though.

"“He’s faking now. We’ve thrown up enough from testing the products for the Snackboxes to know when someone’s really sick or not. Now watch.”)" Aw phooey.

"Therefore, you will be present for my lecture!”

“OW!”

HAHAH!

"“He most certainly did NOT deserve it, Black! You were being a brute and you know it! I don’t know how many times Remus told you to stop, but did you listen to him? No, you were too busy nearly slaughtering our best spy, and over what? Some stupid childhood squabble!” " Yay for a victorious bossy Molly Weasley!

That was hilarious, Molly calling Siri 'daffy' . . . I can't get over it.

Aw. Everyone hates Snape but me. .

Excellently written-so rare for a comedic fiction. Good work, mate.

hahaha this is brilliant. loved Molly choking the hell out of snape!

Oh wow, I can't stop laughing. And as OOC as some of the other characters may have been, Molly was spot on. Always knew Remus was a druggie...

Bahaha! OMG, I LOVE it! I absolutly LOVED it! Oh God, those poor men, and Molly, wow, that woman has a temper. So funny and excieting. Poor Severus ;_; well, at least he's alright. PLEASE make a sequal! Please? It'd make me so happy _

That was wickedly funny!

*dies of laughter* Oh wow! Poor Severus! He just says the wrong things doesn't he? *laughs*

(Gasp with laughter) Ahh... that was totally awesome. I'm getting addicted to your HP stories... Poor Remus and Sirius though (the ear thing must've hurt .

that was funny

that was FUNNY

That is an amazing one shot. Very unique. It was fantastic!

Excellent premise! This was very funny and entertaining. Remus with the chocolate was priceless! It was great that no one offered to cast a healing charm on Snape, even though he couldn't cast one on himself. I rooted for Sirius the whole time! :)

HAHAHAHA. molly is so cool! :D

that was a really good story, i was cheeirng sirius on the whole time! lol, write more soon!

p.s.- can u review a few of my stories-

Lily and James, a History

A Cheating Ring

Hermione's mine

thanx!