Lovely story. Good work.

Jesus, Kate, you rock so much. I've told you I love this fic, right? It almost makes me feel bad for Sara.

...almost.

(And as a side note, I just realized I hadn't added you to my favorite authors list over here. How could've I committed such an oversight?)

Ahh, teaching seventh graders how to write fanfiction. If I had had a class like that, well, maybe I would have gotten a more-than-one-page fic actually finished. So, Sara has a gaydar. Well, the actual definition in the dictionary says that gaydar is how *gay* people identify each other, so who does she have? Cath? (I'd go on and list people in that coolio way you did, but I can't think of any other CSI women). Anyway, good once again.
Alexandria

As a fellow teacher of teenagers with a possibly - nay, probably - unhealthy obsession with slash, you have my sympathies and and complete whole-hearted support. I laughed until I snorted.

Oh... cool!! Greg/Gil right? I mean, why was Greg entering Gil's office, then? :D
Keep up the good work!

That was great. ^_^

Not a huge fan of slash but you write so well!

Bwah, nicely done! I could almost hear Sara actually saying those words and see Grissom's articulate facial expressions. As a bonus, I sporfled out loud a few times during the proceedings. ;)

Found this through the Gil loves Greg community. You'll teach your seventh-graders grammar and writing just fine, if this story is any clue as to what you know about your writing. Very enjoyable! :D

Awesome Sara.

Granted, I'm not a Sara *fan*, but still.

LOL! Yet another great one.