Great story so far! but now i have ot leave work and i cant read anymore. (pouty face) I'll read more tomarrow!

Write on!

~Celtic-Dragon-89

Loved both stories I figured to wait till the end to review...now all I wish for is for you to continue it?

Sheya

curious i wonder wat griffer said?
hmm well just have to wait and see i guess.
hope you continue soon luv it so far

I'm a little confused about the tournment (what it is, what is it for ect) but that probly come later in the story so no worries. I liked the quote. Macbeth is a great story to quote from with the way your plot is forming.

WHOO WHoo,

Go Go Go
Can't wait for the next one.

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!

I realy enjoyed this one.

Ta

totally cool

I SAY MACBETH (A.K.A. THE SCOTISH PLAY)

What happened??

Just read BP and the two Chapies of DR and loved it.
Did you give up on this one or is it going to get a new lease on live later on?

Please let me know.

Ta

Pretty good so far. Don't let the lack of reviews get you down.

Keep it up.

~DR~

Good start. I'll be reading this one as closely as I read the last one. Anyway as to the dialogue. Macbeth would be interesting. it's a dark play and would fit nicely

~DR~

Love the story, can't wait to read more.