I am really getting into this story and I know it's Torn who is getting attacked.

*nods* Nothing to indulge the inner gothic/poetic side like a short, gorey drabble. *smiles* I like how you got things from a preadatory perspective and all that, very nice.

Very sad at the end but well written

i'm going to guess the guy Jak was humping was Torn, but the ending was so...sad.

It makes you want to cry and then not cry. The two died, but was jak like still in the demon or not?

I wonder why Torn couldn't save him instead of killing him?

You posted it! And it's still very very good. ^_^ *huggles*

Aw, that was an awesome Drabble great job!