For some ostensibly inexplicable reason, I'm completely drawn to unwholesome pairings. This was nice, the type of bitter sweet that makes you hope for more. Seasons encompass so much more than the patent. Unique. :]

(Renata)

wow. very beautiful, very good

SAD AND INTERESTING!Great story!

So sweet and sad. Wonderful, though.

That was sad write more.

...O__O

Awesome-isity...

Sad, but beautiful.

It's me again, I decided to check out your other works and I must say I'm very impressed...no, shocked at the amazing skills you have in writing...envious or jealous I might add...damn you for being the greatest writer in this entire site!

this was beautiful and treated oh so properly for such a controversial pairing.

my favorite line is below:

'Beneath the gray sky, she slips inside his skin, and shivers at the icy feel of it, wondering if hers will be the same some day.'

thank you very much for writing this.

AH DAT WAS BEUTIFUL! LOL! I really like kohaku! hes my favorite. I always thought that he was the deepest of all da charectors. Dis was GREAT! keep writing. is there incest in this? the kissing spine thing sounds like it.

Loved your use of the seasons, and how you worked it back into the end. Especially autumn, since I always veiwed it as celebration, and life, the colours of the trees...

Title is very pretty too.

Ooh, wow, love it. Especially "his body has long been its own coffin". I like the idea of the turn of the seasons coinciding with the progression of Sango and Kohaku's lives.

I really do like this so much, the contrast of their happy early lives with the bitter end, and how even the carefree childhood was full of shadows. You never fail to serve up a winner.