Oh, yeah! Who called it? An elemental AND sprites!

The truce with Draco made me very happy.

Egad! Storm clouds when Harry's angry!
Either an elemental or something to do with those awesomely awesome sprites we saw earlier. Or neither...I get a tad ahead of myself sometimes.

Excuse me while I go transfigure a table into a snail. His name will be Squishy and he shall be mine. He shall be my Squishy.

Yay! I love sprites. They're right near dragons and griffins at the top of my 'Awesome Mythical Creatures' scale.

One other nitpicky comment. I'm sorry I keep doing this! You said the bell 'wrang', but it should be 'rang'.

I can't get over how much I love your story!
I like how Harry studies to become stronger, he's not just overnight Super!Harry.
I also like the character Selena, there's a lot of potential with her.

One mistake, however, in Chapter 1.
You said 'constant viligence', but the term is 'vigilance'.

nice one

Ok love your stories dude but it seems so unlikely that RON would ever get Quidditch Captain over Harry. I mean, please, Harry's been on the team since his first year, while Ron I found was a mediocre player, and he only did well when he actually applied himself, which was what, once? So therefore, I deemed this part of your story very unbelievable, and frankly, it actually ruined it a bit for me. Just thought you ought to know!

Its really really (I would put lots of really's but its 2:31 in the morning and i just can't be bothered but imagine they ate there) good!

This story is just ae good as your other one. No really it is better and funnyer. But who is GB??

Wouldn't it be nice if Harry, with all his training and power, could actually out duel his DADA teacher? Wouldn't it be nice if he and Alex actually had a romantic relationship? I mean, kisses on the cheek are for siblings and friends! Alex and Selene seem too good. Harry really needs some snogging and shagging and a LOT more duelling training if he and a partner can't take out Selene.
Wish there was more Luna time, too.

ooh, is harry controlling the weather, or is it just a coincidence?

Love this story! r u making another sequel??

Hey, great series, absolutely love it! Thanks a lot for writing it, you're amazing! :D

Abs x

What happened to Katie Bell?

love the story, hope you'll update asap!
Please tell me what is the next story's tittle.

Heh Heh!!
GREAT fic - about the same calibre as your prequel . . . AWESOME!!
I'm really looking forward to reading it's sequel!!
Thanks!!