Reviews for Sins of Commission

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Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-03-05 ch 16,	abuseA brillint ending, well done.
sara303 2007-03-02 ch 3,	abuseit is great so far i wish i was finshed with it i will be soon. i dont think greg would ever clean his appartment unless some one helped.lol well great story i will finish it soon
dumbblonde76 2006-08-15 ch 1,	abusethis sounds interesting. can't wait till i read the rest!
princessako 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abusei love this story. i am an old reviewer with a new pen name.
Fwe 2006-04-23 ch 16,	abuseWell... It seems my review got eaten. ;) Anyway, as I said in the review I tried to give, but no longer exists: This was a wonderful story with fantastic characterization, a fast moving plot, some great humor (with some excellent angst), and was overall, a beautiful piece of work that you should be proud of. I always seem to give up when I write multi-chaptered stories (as you can tell), and I must day, that I'm actually proud that you finished this despite all of the problems along the way. Kudos to you. Now... go write a sequel. ;)
Annibal 2006-04-22 ch 16,	abuseI just reread this fic again. Yay! Made me happy. Hit me even harder this time around, all the AMAZING angst and awesomeness, 'cause my brother's been in the hospital for two and a half months with a bad brain injury...and he's been acting a lot like Greggo did pre-Olaf arrival. It's pretty...er, hard. And by hard i mean surviving magog infestation sort of gnawing, devouring the soul sort of hard. Hopefully real life can end as amazingly as your story, H.C., 'cause it's pretty amazing. I think I only now appreciate that.
xXMercurialXx 2006-02-25 ch 17,	abuseCat, I LOVE you're muse! I'm really sorry I couldn't get to read for a while, but it's still awesome freaking possum! Do you think I could borrow you're muse for as while? I'm having problems with the first chapter of the Grudge prequel... I don't even know what's it's called get... Maybe I'll just steal you're beta... You will in the US right...? Hee hee... Just joking.. Anyway, I find it extremely hilarious that Cahterine kills Greg in his dream, something that even I didn't see coming, and I've had some pretty wierd ideas in my life. Keep writing! You only get better - if that's possible...! The extremely morbid. half-insane chick you beta for, xCxBxBx P.S. My friend reviewed your story (Intelligent-one) I found it rather funny.
karmine 2006-02-01 ch 17,	abusethis story is great, no excellent! when i read the part were the mom said "do you know were the nearest furneal home is" i thought i was going to cry i really thought Greg was dead! really good story though!
Lalenna 2006-01-31 ch 17,	abuseVery glad ya muse came back lol...I was slightly freked by the whole Caths dream part...very scary lol. Great fic -Lenna
Annibal 2006-01-31 ch 17,	abuseWow, I had almost forgotten about this fic, then you updated and I honestly squealed with happiness! Yay! Now I can add it to my "Awesome fics" folder in my favourites and reread it whenever I want! Awesomeness.
Cyann 2006-01-31 ch 15, anon.	abuseHello you ! Just un little feed to tell you that your fic is so... wow ! ^^ And Griss is love ! I just ask you a little favor : can I translate your fic for French Lectors please *** eyes* 'Cause I find it so great, I can't resist to let them read it ! ^^ If you're OK, I will post it on the forum of CSI France (http://csifrance2.free.fr/) Thanks for your fic ! Cyann PS : CSI ROCKS !
writeaboutme 2006-01-20 ch 15, anon.	abuseOMG! I've spent most of the school day and most of the night reading this and now ur going to kill Greg?!? You can't let him die. Maybe come close but he can't die. Other than that, it's a great story. update the rest soon. VERY SOON!
pleaseupdate 2006-01-08 ch 15, anon.	abuseplease finish this! i really enjoy reading it!please please please
Alicat Sanders 2005-12-02 ch 2,	abuseVery good, i could really feel grissoms anger. id be the same lol. yay have to read more!
Alicat Sanders 2005-12-02 ch 1,	abusevery good, i have to read on now to find out what u did with poor greggo

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