plz contionue i like this story alot and hope tht there r many chapter to come i love garra and sakura storys very much!

To continue!! It sounds like the beginning of a story, not a one-shot. It's awful to leave us hanging like this.

Sounds like a good start to a story i'd be very happy if you continue this after dawning (awesome story :D).

I am absolutely speechless. This piece is a true work of art, and there is only one thing I can say: CONTINUE!!

CONTINUE XD

Beautiful...
You made me believe that came right out from Gaara's thought and feelings...you understand him, you sympathize with him and I love you for that. I would be ecstatic if you decide to continue this.

I look forward to reading more if you continue this story.

Continue please!

CONTINUE! I REALLY want to know how she helped! Gah, I hate being confused, it's so FRUSTRATING! (pulls out fur in anger)

(DL: That wasn't exactly smart...)

Wha? What do you - OWW! OUCH OUCH OUCH OWWIE! THE PAIN!

(DL: ...Wait, why am I still here? Shouldn't I be reviewing? (sighs and shrugs) oh well, I might as well say good job while I'm here. I hope you do continue it, like Shadowpaw here does.)

YOU BETTER BELIEVE IT, LADY!

(DL: Talk about deja vu! (points at Naruto saying 'believe it') Creepy... (shivers))

A definite yes on that question of weather or not to continue this fic.

This fic is great. Lots of great, detailed insight on his character.

His voice seemed kind of boring at first, but as I read on, I really thought that it suited him: to-the-point, unromantic, detached. And I think it's very fitting that the story be told from Gaara's pov. because he's lonely and has lots of time to be in his own head. If you keep telling it in Gaara's pov., first person, seeing Gaara's voice contrasting against his emotions, and telling a plot-line, would be very intense, very ambitious, very intriguing and nothing you wouldn't be capable of.

It's crazy how well you can form these characters that aren't even yours. You have impressed me out of my socks once again.

I can't wait to see what you do with this fic!

Continue! Continue! Pleasepleaseplease!

Well, it may be too late, but I'd love to read more of this. After "Dawning" is finished, of course.

That seemed like a good ending right there, but I wouldn't say no to a continuation! ^_^ I like reading stories, and some are just meant to stay as one-shots, but others are not. You know what I mean?

ttfn!
EvilFaerie17

I know it's been a while since you wrote this and you probably aren't interested anymore, but I just wanted to say that this is a beautiful fic. You definitly got inside Gaara's head.
kudos to you

This is very interesting, a really nice insight into the mind of Gaara. It works well as a one shot, but I could see it turning into a longer fic, though it's up to you obviously. You seem to be a very detail orieted writer and it makes for some really good stories and not just plot but the way you manage to pull all those details together really helps to draw the audience in and the reader just can't help but continue reading waiting to see what comes next.