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Reviews For: Walk in Rain

k. w.
2005-03-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour descriptions are always so eloquent (I loved that descriptive segment in the beginning, and how you transitioned to Kaiba standing in the scene you had set) and this fic was so... deep, metaphorical, original, and a whole slew of other things (all positive). Seth (from this story) seems to have less of an arrogant/ sarcastic attitude than did Set (from "Meskhnet," which I hope you get to finishing.), as well as more potential for saying all that lovely inspirational stuff. There wasn't much of a plot in that not that much happened, but the story itself was short and I felt it was complete nevertheless.
Nachzes Black-Rider
2005-03-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseNachzes: [pants] I actually read this two days ago, but I couldn't review it until now, so here goes: Good fic, although the lack of angst (for some reason) depresses me, but what the **. Nice interaction. LEMONS!
faeriefeline125
2005-03-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMG, this was so fluffy. ^^ It kinda gave me diabetes(no offense!). And, this is kinda sad also, that I'm using a review to GET BACK AT YOU, but I have a message to deliver: Mr. S says that he wants to discuss your fanfic ideas; says that they have real potential if they are guided in the right direction. Namely, he wants his hand to guide you.
Tamlin
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. It really made me homesick. I love rainy days. I suppose it's lucky that I do since I lived for far too long on the Northern California coast. I used to like sitting in a cafe in the downtown area and watch the rain while sipping hot cider. Your story made me think of that. Here's a neat site for fan art just take out the spaces. If you go to Seto/Jonouchi section, there is a neat pict. of Seto, Jonouchi and Seth that is really funny. So is the one with Seth and Yami as kids playing in the sand. It's under Seto/ Pharaoh. http: //w.yugioh. esmartkid. com/
Ikumak
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseWow, this fic was really poetic. And it had a great message behind it.
allison lightning
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseI really like this story, it is so cute. Seto/Seth is so kawaii! Annyway liked it!
-Ally
Red Vixen
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseHey I liked this keep it up!
I think it was an interesting take on things, I really do. Expecially the part about the walking in the rain and some get wet.
Sapphire Siren
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseI have one word to say to this. AW! ^^U It's so cute! And Seto DID grow up too fast... ;_; *huggles* >>
Misura
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuse[Good luck with your googling! ~.^ You definitely deserve it, for having brightened my day with this rain-filled fic.]
An enjoyable and fun read, in which I especially liked the way Seth finally managed to make Kaiba smile. Kind of. ^-^
Kurosaisei
2005-03-16
ch 1,
abuseIt was so very pretty. [loves]

(I wouldn't consider my artwork "nice"...but my id on DevArt would be "Yu-chan", if you're interested.)

To note, I love how prolific you're being.
scelerus animus
2005-03-16
ch 1,
abuseCute! XD
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