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theCamelPotatoSmurf
2005-04-15 . chapter 3
heehee! a certain someone has finally gotten of her certain lazy bum and gone to a certain website and reviewed a certain story! i love this story! how much have you written since I last read your notebook?
Otaku Mom
2005-04-09 . chapter 3
You do seem to have an interesting plot. I find myself wondering why in the world Yuki and Kyo have to go to Ecuador together. I do feel bad for Ayame...but I suppose he brought it on himself. Not quite sure I see Shigure as being in character but it works for your story. What happens next?
Otaku Mom
2005-04-09 . chapter 1
I can't help but wonder where you are going with this story. It seems an interesting concept. On to the next chapters. I'll leave a better review later.
intellectual vixen
2005-03-30 . chapter 3
Poor Ayame... but that was a good chapter. Why'd you change it to Equador? Not that it'llmake any difference to me, but... Can't wait for the next chappie. Keep it going!
amberblood
2005-03-28 . chapter 3
poor aaya! figures shigure was trying to be stupid...short is okay, at least its here! post more soon!
Makurayami Ookami
2005-03-28 . chapter 3
its very good and the fight between yuki and ayame
is funny.
wow kyo and yuki sitting next to each other and no
fight.
Scarebaby666
2005-03-28 . chapter 3
I don't blame Yuki for being sore to his brother but he shouldn't just push him away completly.
oh well que sara sara as shigure always says.
update soon.
amberblood
2005-03-26 . chapter 2
i love this! so funny and aaya is clueless as always. cant really picture kyo watching soap operas, specially the cheesy hospital ones! lol, keep it up!
Duzzel
2005-03-26 . chapter 2
that was like really awesome! I think Thoru should go with them to the temple. I wish i could comment more but i can't, bye.
The8thSin
2005-03-26 . chapter 2
hnO_oSoap operas?WTF?!?!*laughing ** off at Kyo*I CAN'T BELIEVE HE'D EVER WATCH SOAP OPERAS!!MR.BIG-BAD CATMAN IS WATCHING HOSPITAL SOAP OPERAS!*continues to have a heart attack from laughing so hard*DUDE THIS KICKS ** SO UPDATE SOON!*continues to die laughing*
Makurayami Ookami
2005-03-26 . chapter 2
i like it
please continue
inuwoo
2005-03-26 . chapter 1
this is AWESOME! i f*ing love you, this fanfiction is so0o0o0oo awesome...i love you! you better write more, otherwise i will literally hang myself. you rock my socks off! pweze write more, because you're amazing!! you've got some real talent, and i love you for it! it truely sounds like a real fruba episode...I HEART YOU!
Scarebaby666
2005-03-25 . chapter 2
UPDATE thats all I have to say.
Scarebaby666
2005-03-24 . chapter 1
UH! COOL!
this is a really good story did Yuki have a dream too oh and I don't think Yuki is to good a climber.
UPDATE OR I KILL YOU!
intellectual vixen
2005-03-19 . chapter 1
This one sounds good, you know? I like it! I wanna find out what happens in the end already!
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