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| i read online 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseI enjoyed this story! I like how you moved from current day back to the past (after hinting at it) and then back to the present. The humor was nicely mixed in with the introspection and the banter... and the frustration. The final touch, with the set-up question, was a nice end instead of overly cute. Thanks! |
| Anastashia 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, funny and sweet. I'd love the story where they finally figure out about the scratches. |
| emeraldeyezcu 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLovely fic, that was. Wonderful everything. -ponders- I do wonder where those scratch marks were from... hm... teehee You did a wonderful job, and held true to the characters. Perfect title, as well. You also had wonderful twists that I never saw coming. Thumbs up. = ] |
| BlackRaven 2006-02-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat story.. I'm going through all of your stories now... I just love the way you write.. |
| starbuck042786 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseI vote that he will have the best laugh in his life. Thanks for the great story! |
| Maelys 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was a good one! I love Lee/Kara |
| Nytel 2005-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this story! I always like reading about Kara and Lee's academy days and this was no exception. Plus you made it all so believable. And the end was sweet and funny which just tied it up so nicely. Thank you so much for writing it. :) |
| Mystique1515 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abuseCan't wait to read more. |
| Peri of the Elves 2005-06-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like how well-written all of your stories are. I especially liked this part, "He laughed to himself as he imagined his running being the sign of the apocalypse." My friends are always joking that me doing anything improper is a sign of the apocalypse(If you knew me you'd think that too) so I really thought this was funny. |
| AthenaBSG 2005-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the twist at the end. I'm a total Lee/Kara shipper all the way. They belong together. You did a really nice job. ~Kendra "Athena" Corrino~ |
| Vague Lenore 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseVery well written and believable. |
| cbprice25 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseCute ending. |
| storytellergirl 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was an incredible story! I loved how you filled out the Lee-Kara-Zak thing! I can't wait to see what you do next! |
| Raquedan 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abuseOh ! This is absolutely perfect! Really long, but who cares? Excellent job! |
| Kou Shun'u 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abuse^_^ even though it was a oneshot im glad you did it appropriately enough to make it long enough. very good-though i think you should put a warning on top saying that it is a spolier for "hand of god" episode so that others wont have to email you in the future ^__~. but yeah i really liked it-im glad to have had that huge flashback. i actually was suprised with having that first yr as zak-esp with all the negative things she had said. and of course i was wondering the whole time when they were occupied how was that she was able to hook up with zak afterwards. but given the situation and the way you had both before and after and this happening exactly where it did-well then the timing of that for this story was perfect esp given the reasons of different pursuit and of letting things go. very nicely done. i enjoyed it emmensily and hope to see more of your work. esp if they get to be longer than oneshots. |