GOOD! This is realy awsome- i love the idea of Logasn the x5. very cool. you are a great writer, i cant wait to go read your other stuff! keep writing!

I really love your story and how you wrote Tima and Kito ! - and sequel? There definitely should be one... some Tima/Kito romance involved... please? :)

! that was great! they're back together! yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! i love it! this story rules!sequels or prequels will be apreciated!

sequal! prequel! i want em both... im also not against any ::ahem:: reunion (in descriptive detail, of course!) hehehe... i need another brainwashing, but i like to hang in the gutter ;)

YYYYYAaaaaaaaa! you finished! letting lydecker live opens a lot of possobilitys, and maby max and logan can get another kid.

It was thrilling to read this. A terrific story. Any prequels or sequels will be well worth the wait. But don't make us wait too long!

Love it. You got to write a sequel and a prequel. The public demands it.

Nice work there Darwin, and a good ending, I'm anxiously awaiting the prequel/sequel stuff, please produce more!

oh, i like where this is going.please keep going. don't make me beg. oh to heck with it. puh- continue!

Kicks some major f-ing a&& there Darwin, but you are torturing us with these slow updates, we want more!

Oh i hope there is going to be more to this story! it was brilliant, honestly i am enjoying this story alot its got real character to it! i will email with a crit thought about it if u want me too cos there were a few teeny things i noticed but overall it was fantabulous! cant wait to read ur others!xxxMinty

yea! go logan! shoot that dead! this is a great story!

Yarrgghh, you are good at writing this, but curse you for leaving us hanging AGAIN!

toture!torture!torture!torture!torture!torture!torture!toture!torture!TORTURE!

please continue SOON!

Nice chapter, cool action, but you're torturing us AGAIN!