 brigrove 2009-07-01 . chapter 25Very touching story |
 brigrove 2009-07-01 . chapter 15I'm curious. If she had a hiding spell, why could Stan see her? |
 brigrove 2009-07-01 . chapter 7I'm curious why nobody has checked for Jane Does.
Loved the line “Can’t it just stay in?” Hermia pleaded. “I don’t mind being pregnant.”
By the way, she wouldn't HAVE medical bills. Almost everyone in Britain uses the NHS (National Health Service) funded by taxpayers. |
 brigrove 2009-07-01 . chapter 6In Britain we don't have graduations from school and Hogwarts mirrors the English (not the Scottish!)school system
Brian |
 DizzlesScarlett 2008-01-17 . chapter 25All I can say is Aw...
I love it! |
 DizzlesScarlett 2008-01-16 . chapter 10So I was back for a couple of chapters, but I'm about to head off again... I'll try and get myself up in time to read a couple chapters before my first class in the morning, but I don't know.. I'm really tired. :}... So He's right apon them and he dosn't even know it.. So sad...
*_-Lisa-_* |
 DizzlesScarlett 2008-01-16 . chapter 5I hate not having time to finish the things I start, but sadly I have no time to finish this story at the moment.. It's a great begining... Ah.. Hermione's having twins... :) Now where in the world is Ron? Geeze... He better be getting his arse around here.. Poor Mione.. going through this without her friends.. her family.. why didn't Ron and Harry look in the muggle world? Hermione was after all a muggleborn.. Anyways, I'm sure I'll find out soon.. Till then.. I'm off.
*_-Lisa-_* |
 gossipgirl101 2008-01-13 . chapter 1its realy nice |
 xox-emily-xox 2007-11-23 . chapter 25 ((Forgot to log in sorry!))
Awesome sequal! I was so glad when Hermione came back! nice way to bring her back too! :D |
 Avanell 2007-10-21 . chapter 25Great job! Loved reading the last few chapters again :) |
 Avanell 2007-10-21 . chapter 14I remember this story now! I jumped forward to the chapter before this, but enjoying the reunion! |
 alizaleven 2007-08-02 . chapter 25Yay! This was amazing... I loved it! :)
Ali |
 qt4good 2007-07-19 . chapter 25Aw sweet story :) I was happy to read that you made this sequel. :) Great work with the plot-line, and it's good seeing Hermoine is still as stubborn as ever lol! |
 message.in.the.inferno. 2007-07-04 . chapter 25o my god that was so cute! |
 nutnatz 2007-04-29 . chapter 25Hey there. Once again we havea separation story. But I was delighted with the addition of the twins. Seems that Ron is the first in the family to have kids. I really enjoyed this.
Just noting that you have an issue with homonyms ( words that sound alike but are spelled differently). The rest of your grammar and spelling is quite fine otherwise. They probably slip past spellcheckers because the words are spelled correctly, but they are the wrong words.
Examples:
heel/heal
lose/loose
seemed/seamed
angel/angle
Those are just a few exampled I found while reading. I just wanted to point it out just in case you hadn't noticed it before. Honestly, even though I'm pretty much of a grammar and spelling freak, the homonym mix ups don't really bother me that much but sometimes having someone beta fics helps.
On to read the third one. |