Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Hermione's Gone - Page 1 of 16
brigrove
2009-07-01 . chapter 25
Very touching story
brigrove
2009-07-01 . chapter 15
I'm curious. If she had a hiding spell, why could Stan see her?
brigrove
2009-07-01 . chapter 7
I'm curious why nobody has checked for Jane Does.
Loved the line “Can’t it just stay in?” Hermia pleaded. “I don’t mind being pregnant.”

By the way, she wouldn't HAVE medical bills. Almost everyone in Britain uses the NHS (National Health Service) funded by taxpayers.
brigrove
2009-07-01 . chapter 6
In Britain we don't have graduations from school and Hogwarts mirrors the English (not the Scottish!)school system

Brian
DizzlesScarlett
2008-01-17 . chapter 25
All I can say is Aw...

I love it!
DizzlesScarlett
2008-01-16 . chapter 10
So I was back for a couple of chapters, but I'm about to head off again... I'll try and get myself up in time to read a couple chapters before my first class in the morning, but I don't know.. I'm really tired. :}... So He's right apon them and he dosn't even know it.. So sad...

*_-Lisa-_*
DizzlesScarlett
2008-01-16 . chapter 5
I hate not having time to finish the things I start, but sadly I have no time to finish this story at the moment.. It's a great begining... Ah.. Hermione's having twins... :) Now where in the world is Ron? Geeze... He better be getting his arse around here.. Poor Mione.. going through this without her friends.. her family.. why didn't Ron and Harry look in the muggle world? Hermione was after all a muggleborn.. Anyways, I'm sure I'll find out soon.. Till then.. I'm off.

*_-Lisa-_*
gossipgirl101
2008-01-13 . chapter 1
its realy nice
xox-emily-xox
2007-11-23 . chapter 25
((Forgot to log in sorry!))

Awesome sequal! I was so glad when Hermione came back! nice way to bring her back too! :D
Avanell
2007-10-21 . chapter 25
Great job! Loved reading the last few chapters again :)
Avanell
2007-10-21 . chapter 14
I remember this story now! I jumped forward to the chapter before this, but enjoying the reunion!
alizaleven
2007-08-02 . chapter 25
Yay! This was amazing... I loved it! :)



Ali
qt4good
2007-07-19 . chapter 25
Aw sweet story :) I was happy to read that you made this sequel. :) Great work with the plot-line, and it's good seeing Hermoine is still as stubborn as ever lol!
message.in.the.inferno.
2007-07-04 . chapter 25
o my god that was so cute!
nutnatz
2007-04-29 . chapter 25
Hey there. Once again we havea separation story. But I was delighted with the addition of the twins. Seems that Ron is the first in the family to have kids. I really enjoyed this.

Just noting that you have an issue with homonyms ( words that sound alike but are spelled differently). The rest of your grammar and spelling is quite fine otherwise. They probably slip past spellcheckers because the words are spelled correctly, but they are the wrong words.

Examples:
heel/heal
lose/loose
seemed/seamed
angel/angle

Those are just a few exampled I found while reading. I just wanted to point it out just in case you hadn't noticed it before. Honestly, even though I'm pretty much of a grammar and spelling freak, the homonym mix ups don't really bother me that much but sometimes having someone beta fics helps.

On to read the third one.
Return to Top