I thought the way you subtly had the reader understand Ginny's feelings towards Draco and vice versa was very well done. You're a very good descriptive writer, and you definitely got the characters down. Good work, and don't forget to update it, Ava! :)

OOH MY GOD! NICE you so have to write more! LOL That was AMASING!! LOVED IT!

Write more SOON!

Fantastic!!