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| Rebecca 2005-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was so sad! Love it though! Great work. |
| nokia 2005-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautifully written, but my god ! it was so sad !! |
| Melanthe Vida 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Angel being paranoid is definitely a very interesting and original concept. A beautiful, tragic story. |
| Ducky 2005-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh. Tragic, in an understated way. I liked it. Few typos ("waste" instead of "waist"), but overall, a very well done story. |
| SquirlyForSpike 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, very sad. The thought that Spike didn't want to move away from the sun was almost too much to contemplate. Great story, thank you. |
| tp96 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful piece of work! |