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Reviews For: Broken

Rebecca
2005-08-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was so sad! Love it though! Great work.
nokia
2005-03-19
ch 1, anon.
abusebeautifully written, but my god ! it was so sad !!
Melanthe Vida
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseI love this! Angel being paranoid is definitely a very interesting and original concept. A beautiful, tragic story.
Ducky
2005-03-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseOoh. Tragic, in an understated way. I liked it. Few typos ("waste" instead of "waist"), but overall, a very well done story.
SquirlyForSpike
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseVery well written, very sad. The thought that Spike didn't want to move away from the sun was almost too much to contemplate. Great story, thank you.
tp96
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful piece of work!
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