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| TheCapillary 2005-03-17 ch 1,  | abuseHahaha, clever story. Your Rachel is quite in character, but Logan seems to be a little off. Too perceptive perhaps? Still an enjoyable story overall with good writing skills. |
| Blix Howlett 2005-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseHehe. That was funny, and sweet, and cute. XD I liked it. |