Perfect!

would you mind if i tranlate it in Chinese? i guarantee that i will give references. thank you!

finest work...a logical depiction of Hep's position in Alex world and since when and how that ambiguity started of being a lover or just a frnd...for me whatever the case was, all that matters is their frndship surpassed decades, and Alex joined him soon within the year of his departure...Maybe i ship them as lovers too_

well done...

Well... I just dont know what to say...

You know when a story is so beautiful and well told that you just dont know how to describe it?

I guess that is how i feel right now... so vary shocked and basecaly almost crying... It just left me shaking.

I never send reviews to anybody, probably because english is not my first lenguage and i dont feel very secure about writing anything in english, but you just deserve the efort.

ive been reading fanfics for more than 10 year now and very few of then made me feel as strongly as this one and i mast say it was the first one ive read from Alexander that made me feel something at all (sorry, havent read many of your works yet,.. this one was one of the firsts ones i read from your authoring)

Well, guess that is all.

Please keep writing, your work is amazing.

I agree with you. Hephaestion is really a myth. So many things people dont know about him, yet he is a really important person.

Great story! You described their relationship beautifully. Very well done.

well that was just beautiful!

I loved it! it was brilliantly emotional and heartwarming piece - you filled in the gaps in the movie really neatly

well done! keep writing!

Wow!

I don't know what to write! I just read this whole story and it was totally amazing and very beautiful!

It was so touching how much and how deeply Hephaistion and Alexander loved each other and I can only wonder how you had succeed to write it so well..! And the Myth and mystery of Hephaistion... Oh my, it was so great!

The ending of the story was so beautiful.. I almost cried (like in the movie...)

I totally loved this story! Thank you SO much!

This was great! Your portrayal of Alexander and Hephaistions relationship is just as I like to imagine it: passionate and spiritual at the samte time. A true love of the souls. Way better than the movie!

I love this story - i wasn't sure to begin with (i don't think the summary does it justice) but now i've read it. i'm glad i chose to. It's a nice read. Thanks

hi!

I liked this point of view of Hephaestion self..

I dont like _Bagoas anyway , but Ptolemy was so cute.

Please, psot mroe soon..

GaB

next.. cleitus death?

I love this story! It brought tears to my eyes, yet at the same time I couldn't help but smile. Very clever and sneaky your Hephaistion is. Such an interesting and original idea for a story, I hope to see more like it!

I really enjoyed this story, especially the explanation on why Hephaistion did not sign his art work. It makes sense now days… since none of us REALLY know the truth.

Well done!

Hi!

I jsut started to read it today.. so, i haven't gone too far yer

anywya.. i dont like that eunuch to think about Hephaestion as stupid. And, one more thing, I now that Hephaestion was thought as an idiot, and all that.. a favorite with no skills, but I also know that that's justt a product of envy. I mean, he wasn't that dumb.. he was skilled, but, as always, his triumphs were shadowed by the fct he was Alexander's lover and closest friend.

I can't bear the fact that everynoe think of him as stupid! I mean, his soldiers did liked him.. they knew he was talented, and no dumb. So, Bagoas msut have heard other general's soldiers.

Well..

I'll have to reead more!

GaB