two words that are going to make me sound like a whore but:
PLEASE MORE!
i love this fanfiction

omg diz chp is so freaking awzum & this story has gotten meh addicted to keep on readin it

omg that first chapter is awzum! 7 dat is tru, bout the vapires being more romantic lol or so iv read in diz one vampire book lol

more please. :)

oh no i hope yuki and the others hurry and save shu-chan. please update soon

Wow! this story is still good.

BUT... When are you going too update this story?

Will Yuki and his friends save Shuichi in time?

Or will he share the same nightmare as Esther?

Please update soon!!

interesting...(drawls out word) eiri is a bit out of character. though, and so is everyone else, but using an alternate reality gives you free reign after all, so it fits. your story plot is very interesting, and it really helps that you have background information on the things you write about. your story is very believable, and keeps readers hooked on it. i will definitely wait for an update, no matter how long it takes (although, of course, it is much better if you do it soon)

that was fun,
seyyan

good chapter! sorry it took me so long to read it! i can't wait to read more!

how are you?

Wow that really rocked hurry and update soon and dont forget to look for my new story coming out Escaping also on *_~

may i just say that this is one of my fave. fanfics... i love this story... but you said in your profile that you are a yaoi fangirl... well so am i, currently my fave gravitation fanfic(besides this one of course) is called 'Gravity of innocence' and i sncerally taink you will like it. So you should probally read it it is by Shadows' prince

woo0ot! aawsome chapter! i love the strawberries and soap part! hee hee he...it was awsome, tho i don't know haow that would ruin his plans... and the stay command was pretty cute! can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Awesome chapter, I can't wait for more. I hope Eiri can save Shu. Father needs to die, die very painfully.

You're building up suspense here. Get to the next chapter fast! My imagination is running too wild of what could happen next!

That was great! PLease update soon!

Ahh poor Shu. Still love it though. Can't wait for Eiri to come rescue him *crosses fingers* Thanks for the update ^.^