I should have guessed that Hitler was one of the escapees from hell. Who else would gas Jewish people in their temples? This is an excellent story.

Idle for over five years now I'd assume the story, though clearly intended as the start of something, has been abandonned. Why? who knos, but there are thousnads of others lie it out there. Good beginings, slow reviews so I'd guess that had something to do with it.

It had. still would have great potential. From the introduction that we have, I'd agree with another reviewer and say that the detectives quarry was Hitler or perhaps Mengele. My German is far from perfect, but I believe the Devil's warning to be: Have no pity. This one? is brutal.

Are you ever updating? Please do so soon.

Hitler right? Interesting premise so far. I especially enjoy the dry humour. Great characterization and thank you for the clear and developed ideas. Please update soon, you are one of teh better Brimstone writers I've found lately. Thanks again.

Good job. I'd read the others, but I'm about dead... asleep. So I'll catch up later. Nice job... "Keep it up kid!"

more!

I think I see where you're going , but I'd like to see the bad guy get defeated

Definatly disturbing and creepy. Could stand alone or be continued. I almost like then ending, which leaves you hanging, that adds to the creepyness factor. Very very good.

It's a creepy start to what seems like a good story.

That was fascinating. Though, I think I would freak out if I were Stone and realized that it was the work of Herr evil incarnate. Will you write a continuation of the story? I do hope so.