hope this isnt dead its really good

sorry its been a little while since I reviewed, been kinda busy.
anyway the last 2 chapters were pretty good and were pretty informative as well, an idea to do since you asked is.
Ai might be using the indoor pool, and since the people trying to Kill Ai are similar to the B.O then they would be able to sneak anything in or out of a house without anyone being the wiser about it, so they could try to assassinate Ai via the pool like Knocking her out via a tranquilizer while she is swimming and Genta decides to join her in a dip in the pool and see her and saves her, thus adding somewhat of a plot twist, or she could be on a flotation device in the pool and falls asleep, has a nightmare about Gin and Vodka maybe Vermouth, and wakes up and in an unstable manner, tries to get out of the pool and the same thing happens (Genta sees her in trouble and saves her)
I guess I will let you know if I have anymore ideas, sorry I could help much now.

once again I could've sworn I reveiwed the last chapter,if I didnt I apologize,it said some weird stuff when I tryed to go to the detective conan section of the fanfics,anywaythese chapters that I missed were pretty good, though I dont know what to make of Kimi Asako,but from the way she talks (I could be wrong about this) she does not like Haibara, but she is being Hired to warn her
by an outside scource,though like I said I could be wrong,
and once again sorry for not reveiwing this sooner.

update

sorry I dident review the last chapter,this and the last chapter were pretty good, as for current idea's
the next chapter could just be a fun-ish day for Ai and to take her mind off of things doing something she likes and finds someone she used to know and that person recognizes her and she finds a clue to more about her history,I dont really know if it is good,
but it is the only thing I can think of right now.
hope it helps.

i am only reviewing b/c i don't know Kagura's phone number. CALL ME! I DON'T HAVE ANY SCHOOL!

Haibara is starting to get her memory back with the help of Akemi's ghost,that is a good idea,but what did Akemi mean by 'this story has only just begun'? this so far is getting better and better still.

I could've sworn I reviewed the previus chapter oh well.this chapter was kinda sad as in touching in a good way, having Heiji and Kazuha
say their goodbyes to their son was a nice touch
to the story.

aw, that was sweet... BUT STOP KILLING EVERYBODY!

sorry about all the error's/misspellings and the like in my last review, this is a good plot for the story thus far and is getting even better.
just like the prequil's to this fanfic this is pretty good.

Hehe, I'm actually reading this from the beginning this time! ^_^

You have some bold, intriguing plot ideas. Not many people have imagined what it would be like for Ai to believe she was Ran and Shin'ichi's foster daughter; just the thought of Ai losing her adult memories is unique, but you added that twist as well. Another good aspect of your plot choices is that you refrain from uber-angst, a.k.a. everybody suffering from horrible trials AND hating each other at the same time. The Kudous love and support each other, which provides a good balance for their "misfortunes".

What makes Ran and Shin'ichi finally want to tell Ai the truth? Is there a need for her to know her past? It would seem more logical for the two of them to leave well enough alone. Also, another Hattori tragedy is alright; but since Kazuha is a significant character, it would be better for the reader to watch her die, rather than just hear about it. And Heiji sounds a little old for his age; obviously, tragedy could provoke that, but it's a little difficult to accept in a new character.

Good job overall! This story sounds like it could go in several exciting directions. Keep writing!

Ow! that was a sad chapter.:( Kazuha & Heiji are dead. how sad! love it even if sad. please i can't wait for more. ^-^

Idea's hm let's see you could have Ai find out everything about her past about gin and vodka and the black organization or Ai haibara from before her memories were wiped could somehow come back and scold or something or she could or she could comfort the Ai with her memoties wiped but rfuese to talk about her past under any circumstance. Ai's sister could tell her about her past but not formula's for any of the apoptoxins(APTX)hope these help I,ll let you know if I,ve got any more Idea's using reviews

onto the actual reviews this is going pretty well I,m enjoying this series alot

breath-held-back Kazuha died?? Aww and isn't wittle Heiji sweet!!

*anime fall* gome ne, I can't spell to save my life! What I ment to say is I'm glad that this is the last part to this story... and about the internet exploding thing... don't ask