Wah~ So sweet, brilliant ending. 'Tis great...

WOW...(Snif) I never thiught that something so good could b so incredably SAD(snif)WAH!

Wonderfully written. :)

Wow. That was really...heartfelt. Yeah, that's a good word. Heartfelt. I really enjoyed this, especially since it wasn't too terribly long winded. Will there be any more? Or is this a one-shot thingy?

O! Awsome!! That was a really neat idea. ^^

WOW! SO TOUCHING

That was so good!

ok i want to say this is good. But it can be so much better. It seems as if you are scratching the surface of everyone. You are recreating the circumstances of Kikyo and Inuyasha and the question of whether or not he will go to hell with her, but you are working on the assumptions of the anime/manga instead of exploring the characters yourself. Did that make sense? You arent providing anyone a reason outside of what we already know for what they are doing. Kagome is going with inuyasha because she already expressed the wish to stay by his side in the cannon. Inuyasha already promised to go to hell in the cannon, etc. I mean this is a possible ending for the love triangle but there isnt any individual growth of the characters from the writer, from you, that flare that makes them yours to breathe life into, it just isnt there. Is is well written and in character, but only surface characters. I hope you take this critizism well, and I plan to keep on reading you, because I did like this but i think there is so much more there you can give us.