I enjoyed this story very much. I loved your description of the hotel room before they cleaned it. It sounded so gross! Poor Monk.
I'm not sure that Monk would actually been able to sleep in the same bed as someone else, but you did a good job of making it believable. Only one other thing bothered me, and that was at some point Natalie said that Monk had to have moved all the way over to her side of the bed, but they were sleeping in a full, which isn't very big.
Overall, great story! I hope you will write another Monk story.

Fascinating story. Appreciate how Fan Fiction provides writers like yourself the venue to explore situations that will probably never appear on the program. Loved the interplay between Monk (may I now say Adrian?) and Natalie who begin to see each other as more than employee/employer and even friends but as two people who can naturally develope a much deeper and meaningful relationship. Sure wish there had been a sequel but I suppose we
can leave that to your readers.

Aw. Poor tortured Monk. Great story! I loved this one!

This is a really cool story. Very funny!

hey i really enjoyed this story- loved the partof thei having to sleep together-- lord our boy adrian is a trip- would love to SEE some of that snuggling but thank goodness for you fanfic writers so i can have some pleasure while the show is on hold until jan.- thanks again

oh I really enjoyed this story- I am a big natalie and a nd adrian shipper so I love this-- I will be fine even if they just remain good friends-- but i love fanfics and you did an excellent job with this one- I did NOt get to read all the chapters yet-- but i am gonna go back and re-read other portions and review on them later-- keep it up and PLEASE write some more natalie and adrian stories--

Oh, WHAT A GREAT STORY!

I was wrong, but my sumation was pretty good...I think. Wow, you really had me there. You're a great author...I must have told you that a dozen times...but it's true...Great Job! :)

Ew...that was pretty disgusting. *gags*

Okay...here's what I think. Mr. Pratt's friend Samantha took pictures of the 'victims' sleeping. She sent them to Mr. Pratt and he scanned the picture somehow and with his knowledge in electronics he put a time of death on the screen with the picture. Then Samantha did the rest. The blackout was done by her so she could sneak into the room and kill the victims without the camera catching what was going on. Mr. Pratt connected his television screen with the picture on it to the guests screens. The reason why he did this is because he is tired of running a run-down motel. So he didn't take care of it. He didn't hire any maids to clean, so maybe people wouldn't come, but that didn't work so he did this 'ghost' thing. He was hoping that this would finally get people to stop coming.

Am I right? I guess I will find out next chapter.

ADRIAN! omg...is he okay!?

I think I solved the case. I figured out who it was when Adrian asked Mr. Pratt if he studied electronics...I knew it was Mr. Pratt. I figured out why he was doing this when he called the motel a dump and he would be out of a job soon. And I figured out he was getting help from a nurse when the blackouts were talked about...I can't figure out the blackouts, but yeah...

Great chapter. I will see if I figure out the rest next chapter. :)

I think it was a very great chapter! It had everything in it...it was sweet...and then it began to turn creepy. I liked how it was a long chapter! I like long Monk chapters!

I don't think the nurse did it...well...actually...maybe...I think 50-50 right now... :)

Oh, well...I just misunderstood another thing. She didn't take his pillowcase...she just has to share a bed.

This was a great chapter. Really funny. I liked the part where he wanted her to sleep on the dresser or in the bathtub.

Poor Adrian. I know how he feels. I hate sharing beds...I'm kinda scared to share a bed, cause it feels...icky...and I don't trust everyone 100%. I know that's wrong...*sigh* But I still love my friends and family...I trust them...sure...just not 100%. I hope you don't mind me telling you this. But thanks for listening...

I'm gonna read some more. :)

Oh, I should have known...it's Sharona...I feel so dumb.

Wow, this already has been a hectic night. And now Natalie is taking Adrian's pillowcase from him. Poor guy. :(

Aw.

It's too short.

*sniffle*

Okay, okay. It was really good anyway. *grin* This last chapter was utterly adorable: with Monk's little slipup about not being cold until Natalie had moved. *grin*

Normally I don't review completed stories until I've read the last chapter, but since you said this was your favorite chapter to write...so far, this one and the last one were my favorites to read. It was kind of funny to picture Adrian and Natalie arguing like that, and then really sweet to picture them sleeping like that. And I definitely loved how Adrian chuckled and made the crack about them 'sleeping together'.

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR! Two of my favorite subjects-'ghosts' and MONK! w00t0rZ! *grin*

Aw...that was sweet how he saved Natalie!

Umm...what the crap!? Who is this woman!? I thought there was only Trudy. Guess there is only one way to find out...