awesome story! hope to see more x3

My god this is so incredibly badly written, I think I was a little bit sick. Your character is a blatent Mary Sue. Sort her out, or preferably, just delete the story forever. Come back when you can write. Ta ta!

"...who has grey eyes that change colors with her emotions..."

Ok... the story itself is fun. I would advice you to write stories of your own instead of fanfiction because it is what you are doing: disregarding everything in the story to replace it with your own plots and ideas. Don't take it the wrong way, I love fanfiction, but if you have the imagination to turn everything around this way then I am sure you can some up with your own original characters which would definitely be fun to read.

However, that part I just quoted from your story is so... so... Mary Sue. *shudders* Is it really necessary for her eyes to change colors with emotions? It's been done over and over again and it's really quite annoying. Also, when she retorts angrily make her say something that would stun YOU to silence. What Veronica says sometimes is so... tame... that it wouldn't make my four year old niece shut up. She would probably just laugh in her face and walk away.

Anyway, you can do what you want with my review. I do wish that you don't think of it as a flame. Just as constructive criticism.

You had her do wandless magic? Is something the matter with you? Neither Voldemort nor Dumbledore can do wandless magic, in fact Voldemort disparately wanted the Elder Wand because it was so powerful. The only non wand magic is done by great emotions and it's little things like something exploding or Harry's hair growing. Not spells. You know who does magic without wands? House elves. Is she a house elf?
Did you even read Harry Potter or did you just see the movies and decide to write a fanfiction because this is truly terrible. You just savagely raped canon and there is no explanation for it.
And why do her eyes flash? Oh I forgot your character just had to be so *~special*~. Maybe she should be made of fairy dust and marshmallows too. That'd be adorable.

Great chapter! Please continue :)

Hi! I really like this story. I have read it several times. I would like to know if you will ever truly complete it however as it is sorta a huge cliffhanger. Any Way I think that this is a really good series.

I really love this story. I hope that you update soon. You really have a wonderful story going. Keep up the great work and update soon and often!

oh my god, love this story! why the hell does it only have 25 reviews?!?!!

i like this story... its so cute... please update soon...

I love this story. I cant wait to read the next chapters. Please update soon. Are the Potter's ever going to tell her the truth about her birth?

Hi its me again i love your writing but the only thing i dislike is at the begining when the teachers ask here to do karate and flips

This is the best story on fan fiction i love it and have been reading it non stop DON"T STOP
Do you have a myspace e-mail it to me because you are awesome

NO NOT A EVIL CLIFFY =( PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! my my my rthis shall be a shock! plz update

Great chapters. I am guessing the room or requirement lol. Keep up the good work and update soon!

nice chapter. so did veronica head on up to the room of requirement(sp?)?