it´s a good story. can you please write one more chapter for the story? i want a happy end. i was quite sad at the end.

“well guys…believe whatever you want to believe…”-I thought only Greg would be so funny!

thank God there's a sequel beceause I just want happyb endings bit I like it:)

Please please please write more
Handing on th edge of my seat

Will Sara forgive
What will Ecklie think

I'm dying here

good story...very interesting. i loved the reaction Greg gave when he realized that Grissom was dangling his power infront of him...

Good Job! Great dialogue. good setting. I am looking forward to the sequel

sheila

I love the chemistry that you have between Gil and Sara. I did notice a few grammatical errors. Maybe run a spell check to catch a few of them before submitting.

I consider a good story to be one that I can actually *See* unfolding before me as I read it. I had a clear visual of the party, the balcony, Gil's hand on her cheek.

Very good start.

Cool!! this is really good!! i love it!! cant wait for the sequal! there better be some smoochies. between Sara and Grissom obviously! lol! plz post more soon!! i wanan kno wot happens next!!
Love Megan

Great story! I really liked this story, but this was NOT a happy ending for us GSR shippers. I hope that you'll have your sequel to this story up really soon! God bless you, keep up the great work and we're looking forward to the sequesl!

Sharon

Good, *please end happy, please end happy*

Update soon

I think while it is obvious that english is not your native language...your writing is getting better.