The only thing I don't like, is that rosen isn't really a word. xD Other than that, great poem. =B I wrote a poem like this, but it disapeared in my locker. O_o

hey sorry i like this poem nice ryhme scheme but at the moment i don't have to review your newest chapter so i'll review at home okies?

Ooh, this is extremely good; I, personally, suck at writing poems (I'm more of a story girl). Oh, and, feel free to IM me if you have any IM names (all mine should be listed on my profile)

i like it its nice!!u must be a good poet to write this it rox^_^

Pretty good. You're great at writing poems.

Well, I think it's superbly splendid!!

WEE!! Is that even a word? (Superbly?)

Ah, yes. I love THE POEM! I love poems! Wee, SO OBVIOUSLY I LOVE the poem!! WEE!! I'm having fun today! Luckily I read this, though. Because I'm starting to get bored. But I'm not bored anymore!! YAY! THANKYOU!!

BYE BYE!

(Mysteriously...< < > > )

Cool poem dude! I liked the rhymes, very cool! :)

Wow really nice poem, keep up the good work!
-Emerald*~

I wish I could write poems half as good as yours! Can't wait to see the rest!