sounds good so far. Is this gonna be a Larry and Ren story or no?

This is really good! I like where this is going, it's a shame you haven't added anything else. Maybe Larry and Candice could really fall in love.

Ok, I'm going to put what I think is good and bad ((And I said what *I* think.)):

Good:

1. The story is written well! I like it!

((There is more but I don't have time to put it all o_o))

Bad:

1. The Stevens don't really sound like the Stevens...

2. It's Beale, not Beal.

i like it;)

ooo evil! keep going!

i hate candi. she's stupid. she's a bitch. you're a bitch. so BLAH. :P

Continue!

this story sucks

What is your problem? Can you write or not? You have not captured the even stevens aura! You need some bat crystals!1

um, excuse me girl or boy who put good as their name, GO TO A PORNO SITE IF YOU WANNA SEE CRAP LIKE THAT! PLEASE LEAVE US NORMAL NON-HORNY PEOPLE ALONE! I haven't read the story yet but I'm going to right now!

hey! where's the rest? come on! i need 2 know what happens! its gettin really good!

Ummmm it was nice but I want a fic where it shows Louis and his friend( that one girl) having sex.

That's great! Continue!

lol, this is funny. pllllease finish it! :)

man... u really hate ren huh?

FUNNY story though