Aw, this story made me smile. :'D It was very well written.

I really liked this. It's one of my favorite pairings, and I'm in general a major fan of Kefka, so I would adore this anyway, but it's well written and gives an interesting insight in Kefka's mind, or at least subconscious. Well done!

This is a really good fic, and I really really really like how you've handled the characters and the situation.

You mentioned in your review that you didn't like the way I had used "-ing" instead of a full word in my NPC FFIX fic. There's a reason for it; I'm copying Terry Pratchett in that respect, since he had a character in one of his books that used "-ing" instead of swearing.

No one ever understood what it meant, and it could be anything; all it is now though, is one short, gulped syllable.

I wanted to keep the rating low.

But I'm babbling too much about myself here; lovely ficlet, lovely writing style. Keep it up.

Wow. And I don't even LIKE Kefka... I've been growing to respect him more, recently. Don't like Kefka, don't like slash, don't even care for Leo... yet I liked this. Good for you.