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kokoronagomu
2009-08-06 . chapter 7
what a wonderfully sweet collection!

delighted and entranced,
ginny

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^feel free to browse the gallery, favorites, and fondle anything that strikes your fancy.
Yasha-rai
2009-02-15 . chapter 7
So sweet! T_T
CatLover260
2009-01-16 . chapter 7
Congratulations Everythingismagic — your story Photograph has been nominated for Best Canon at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008!
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CatLover260
mynightshining
2008-12-21 . chapter 7
Aw! Loved it. Great bit of fluff.
Brittany
2008-12-17 . chapter 7
That last line melted me and left me as a puddle of goo on the floor squeeing. Help me, I can't get up.
Cranky Mesuinu
2008-01-10 . chapter 6
Awsome! Great collection.
BaKa-NEKO
2008-01-07 . chapter 5
Oops! I was reviewing for the whole fic? XD Sorry. I meant in the chapter called "kilohertz." Do you know if that's a real game?

Also, I just need to add how much I loved "Our Own World." Under most circumstances, I can't stand fics where InuYasha becomes a mortal, but it was really quite nice. I almost started crying XD

Best of all, though, was chapter five, "Something Desired." I like how you gave Kagome a more satirical edge, which is similar to how I've decided to mold her persona. I just think she and InuYasha fit together better that way (and argue better. Nothing like two smart-alecy and sexually tense teens for entertainment XD). All in all, I can’t say I have much of a critique for you. I can’t wait to read the upcoming chapters.
BaKa-NEKO
2008-01-07 . chapter 4
Is that a real children's game? o.o;
DRAKE220
2007-07-24 . chapter 5
um, i wish i had been so confident that my mom would understand the importance of making out. 'mom i want to make out with my boyfriend and the phone keeps ringing'
'oh, i'll get you a answering machine.'
right. liked the chapter. very cute
robochar
2007-07-07 . chapter 5
Oh that was really good! This is a good follow up to 494 with them trying to kiss but keep on getting interrupted. I love when Kagome just kisses him. You got to feel sorry for poor InuYasha for trying so hard. This is so sweet and just really adorable. I could so see this happening with them. This is an awesome drabble and I can't wait for more.
Mini Nicka
2007-06-22 . chapter 5
Very cute I loved it.
Inudaughter
2006-05-18 . chapter 4
deep
DocBevCulver
2005-10-03 . chapter 4
All, excellent, as your stories always are. I loved reading everyone! :)
scuppers-the-dog
2005-08-27 . chapter 4
i liked this one much better than your other ones. i thought it was pretty nice
QueenTatooine
2005-08-23 . chapter 4
Very interesting, this sounds like a fun challenge. Good luck with the rest. SO fora it seems to be going well, how long do you have to complete all 30 themes? Looking forward to reading more.

~QueenTatooine
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