needs to be edited, some things just, sort of,grate, ya know? I gotta question, was this thing translated from another language? 'Cause some of these grammar errors are atrocious!

Part two is too great,keep it up!

Wow! this is good- I hope you continue it! I can't wait to see what happens! Gideon and Lochley are soo cute together- I can't wait!

OO! This is really,really cool! I love Crusade stuff! Sounds like we've got a little Gideon/Lochley stuff! ::grin:: I love it! Keep up the great work!

It's a good story,some action,can't wait to know the end!

Nice action piece. I hope there will be a conclusion forthcoming. I'd like to know if The Excalibur makes it to B5 in time.